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Poem: "The Bonecage"
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asakiyume From: asakiyume Date: February 10th, 2010 03:18 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh, this is absolutely beautiful. I love the villanelle as a form, and this one of yours is lovely. I love the dual meaning of "I dream to slip the cage I can't disown"--as in, both dreaming in the sense of desiring to do so, and dreaming as a tool to do so.

Beautiful.
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: February 10th, 2010 05:05 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!

*grin* I love it when my readers detect the subtle infrastructure of my poetry. You are exactly right about that bifocal meaning.
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