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Poem: "The Bonecage"
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ladyqkat From: ladyqkat Date: February 10th, 2010 05:28 am (UTC) (Link)
The tardiness of my thank you is only because this poem snuck in and touched me so deeply that I flailed in trying to pinpoint what emotion was invoked. And reading it again tonight, I finally realized that it was a cascade of emotions, rising and falling like a singer practicing scales.

So much range, so much richness of tone and I am still in awe of your talent and skill.

(Forgive me, I am, for whatever reason, verbose tonight.)
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: February 10th, 2010 05:45 am (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!

I am so glad that you appreciated this poem.

>>And reading it again tonight, I finally realized that it was a cascade of emotions, rising and falling like a singer practicing scales.<<

That's the effect I was aiming for. Yay!

Verbose is okay.
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