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Poem: "The Bonecage"
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Brian Miller From: Brian Miller Date: October 27th, 2012 01:54 am (UTC) (Link)

dverse

popping over from the link you left at dverse...enjoying the trip through your villanelles...nice on this one...i like the hope in rising toward the end...i was afraid for a bit that you were handicapped and trapped that way, nice on your refrain lines as well...you should pick one and drop it in the mr linky at dverse...might get a few more readers...
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: October 27th, 2012 02:36 am (UTC) (Link)

Re: dverse

>>popping over from the link you left at dverse...enjoying the trip through your villanelles...nice on this one...<<

Thank you!

>>i like the hope in rising toward the end...i was afraid for a bit that you were handicapped and trapped that way, nice on your refrain lines as well...<<

My body has its limits, but not in the configuration of conventionally recognized handicaps. I know other people who are worse off.


>> you should pick one and drop it in the mr linky at dverse...might get a few more readers...<<

Done, thanks. I hadn't seen that part.
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