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Poem: "The Transformations of Terror" (revised)
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eseme From: eseme Date: March 6th, 2011 03:39 am (UTC) (Link)
Wow, this is creepy.

If this is the final, revised version, I would link to this from your Series Page. I found it by being someone who reads everything, so I read the bits at the top of the poem instead of skipping straight to the poem as many might.
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: March 6th, 2011 05:17 am (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!

>> Wow, this is creepy. <<

Yes, it was intended as psychological horror. I'm glad it works!

>>If this is the final, revised version, I would link to this from your Series Page.<<

Done! Thanks for mentioning this; I had forgotten about the revision. Both versions are now linked from the Serial Poetry page.
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