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Poem: "The Transformations of Terror" (revised)
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valdary From: valdary Date: December 29th, 2009 01:20 pm (UTC) (Link)
That really works well now, the present tense makes it more personal, which is good with terror!
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: December 29th, 2009 05:46 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!

I really appreciate the audience feedback on poems. Sometimes they benefit from a little editing.
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