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Poem: "Shumáad Delineha - Space Flight"
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amjbarnhart From: amjbarnhart Date: November 7th, 2009 07:54 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Thank you!

Oops! I should check my facts before offering corrections. I failed to recognize sháadehul as "growth through transendence", instead seeing only "go/come to an extreme degree". In this setting I perceive no advantage to "náwí" over "sháadehul".

2nd oops: in the first correction I offered, I forgot to pluralize "bethath" to "benethath" (of them (many)). Sorry.

ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: November 11th, 2009 07:22 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Thank you!

Okay, I'll make the last change of "bethath" to "benethath" and announce the final version.

Besides, if xenolinguistics were too easy, it wouldn't be as impressive or as fun. Same with poetry -- I like doing the challenging stuff.
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