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More Verses of "The Sky-Eyes and the Earth-Hearts"
Two new donors and two more verses bring you more delights of xeno-entomology in the next installment of "The Sky-Eyes and the Earth-Hearts." The original post is here.


Since several folks expressed interest in reading more about these characters, I'm making the poem available for sponsorship (there's a permanent PayPal button on my profile page) and including a teaser below.
117 lines, Buy It Now = $58.50
Donations: $26.50
Remaining to fund whole poem: $32.00
Amount to fund next verse: $4.50


EDIT: This poem is being microfunded. Price is $.50/line so $5 would get 10 lines, etc. I have just posted the third verse in response to the first donation, and I'll continue to post more verses as funding arrives. Sponsors: minor_architect, nhpeacenik, browngirl, siliconshaman

The Sky-Eyes and the Earth-Hearts


The Sky-Eyes speak:

We are the Sky-Eyes,
the blue people of the air.
When you came to our world,
it was our territory you flew through
on your way down.

To us Queen Cosmos gave wings and the wind:
it is our duty to defend against threats from above.
When the songhawks come with their deadly voices,
we draw them off with the dance of eyespots.
You say that you mean us no harm, but
Your words batter our ears as savagely as hawk-song.

We know that our young eat the young of the Earth-Hearts.
We know that you think this is wrong,
but this is how our peoples live.
We cannot raise our own young as you do;
those perverts who have tried it always fail.
Without our family ties to the Earth-Hearts,
we would have no balance for the lightness of our minds
and no defense against dangers from below.
We live as we were made to live, and our life is good.
We cannot help how we are made.

How can we tell you
that what would be abuse for you
is for us a fair exchange?
How can we make you understand
that it defines rather than undermines our morality?
We cannot live without the Earth-Hearts;
the ruins of history have shown us why.
Your species was born to compete, even with each other:
how can we teach you cooperation when it is not in your nature?


The Earth-Hearts speak:

We are the Earth-Hearts,
the red people of the land.
When you came to our world,
it was our territory you landed upon
when your ship touched down.

To us Queen Cosmos gave strength and the earth:
it is our duty to defend against threats from below.
When the burrowers come with their crushing claws,
we bite them and sting them and drive them away.
You say that you come in peace, but
we smell the metal claws with which you would crush our culture.

We know that the Sky-Children eat our young.
We know that you think this is wrong,
but this is how our families love.
We cannot abandon their young as you would do;
they are so adorable, they rouse our nurturing instincts.
Without our family ties to the Sky-Eyes,
we would have no balance for the heaviness of our bodies
and no warning of dangers from above.
We love as we were made to love, and our families are good.
We cannot help how we are made.

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fayanora From: fayanora Date: July 4th, 2009 01:55 am (UTC) (Link)
Beautiful poem so far!
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: July 4th, 2009 07:11 am (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!

I am really pleased to see people chipping in to buy verses! I think this will turn into a promising way to market long poems, which otherwise are hard to sell. Not many magazines take them, and not many individual sponsors can afford them. For several months the "co-sponsor" idea has been floating around, but I think this will help fuel it.
fayanora From: fayanora Date: July 4th, 2009 01:55 am (UTC) (Link)

Off topic

ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: July 4th, 2009 04:55 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Off topic

Thank you so much for sharing. That looks like an awesome project.
fayanora From: fayanora Date: July 4th, 2009 11:05 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Off topic

Thanks!
From: minor_architect Date: July 4th, 2009 03:02 am (UTC) (Link)
Whoohoo! It's good to see more. (And I have high hopes of reading the rest. :)
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: July 4th, 2009 04:56 pm (UTC) (Link)

Yes...

... and we're just below the halfway mark now.
From: christinaathena Date: July 4th, 2009 06:51 am (UTC) (Link)
I like this. :-)
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: July 4th, 2009 04:57 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!

I'm glad you're enjoying it. It's fun to see people coming together to fund this, but also fun for me to unveil it piece by piece. I hadn't expected the latter.
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