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New Verses in "The Sky-Eyes and the Earth-Hearts"
Thanks to another donation, I have posted more verses. I'm updating the original post, but I'm also going to include the material here, below the cut. Come read a science fiction poem about symbiotic aliens, being microfunded verse by verse.

"The Sky-Eyes and the Earth-Hearts" is a free-verse poem in which first the Sky-Eyes (butterflies) and Earth-Hearts (ants) speak to the humans, and then the Twin Peoples speak together, so it's in three sections. The parallels are very tight between the first two; there is a lot of repetition and alliteration. It's epic length, almost a thousand words. Since several folks expressed interest in reading more about these characters, I'm making the poem available for sponsorship (there's a permanent PayPal button on my profile page) and including a teaser below.
117 lines, Buy It Now = $58.50
Donations: $20
Remaining to fund whole poem: $38.50
Amount to fund next verse: $1.50

This poem is being microfunded. Price is $.50/line so $5 would get 10 lines, etc. I have posted the first several verses in response to previous donations, and I'll continue to post more verses as funding arrives. Sponsors: minor_architect, nhpeacenik

The Sky-Eyes and the Earth-Hearts

The Sky-Eyes speak:

We are the Sky-Eyes,
the blue people of the air.
When you came to our world,
it was our territory you flew through
on your way down.

To us Queen Cosmos gave wings and the wind:
it is our duty to defend against threats from above.
When the songhawks come with their deadly voices,
we draw them off with the dance of eyespots.
You say that you mean us no harm, but
Your words batter our ears as savagely as hawk-song.

We know that our young eat the young of the Earth-Hearts.
We know that you think this is wrong,
but this is how our peoples live.
We cannot raise our own young as you do;
those perverts who have tried it always fail.
Without our family ties to the Earth-Hearts,
we would have no balance for the lightness of our minds
and no defense against dangers from below.
We live as we were made to live, and our life is good.
We cannot help how we are made.

How can we tell you
that what would be abuse for you
is for us a fair exchange?
How can we make you understand
that it defines rather than undermines our morality?
We cannot live without the Earth-Hearts;
the ruins of history have shown us why.
Your species was born to compete, even with each other:
how can we teach you cooperation when it is not in your nature?

The Earth-Hearts speak:

We are the Earth-Hearts,
the red people of the land.
When you came to our world,
it was our territory you landed upon
when your ship touched down.

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From: browngirl Date: July 3rd, 2009 05:00 pm (UTC) (Link)
I could hear the fluttering wings, somehow.
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: July 3rd, 2009 05:04 pm (UTC) (Link)


They are beautiful in flight, and they do make a fluttery sort of sound.
From: minor_architect Date: July 3rd, 2009 08:50 pm (UTC) (Link)
Hurrah! I'm so glad to see that more of this poem was funded. We just need a little more... ;)
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: July 3rd, 2009 10:16 pm (UTC) (Link)


We are just past the 1/3 mark. The whole first section is posted, and the beginning of the second section. I'm excited too!
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