Elizabeth Barrette (ysabetwordsmith) wrote,
Elizabeth Barrette
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Poem: "When Something Feels Good"

This poem came out of the April 21, 2020 Poetry Fishbowl.  It was inspired by prompts from Dreamwidth users Thnidu and Ari_the_dodecahedron.  This poem belongs to the Polychrome Heroics series.
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This microfunded poem is being posted one verse at a time, as donations come in to cover them.  There is a permanent donation button on my profile page, or you can contact me for other arrangements. You can also ask me about the number of lines per verse, if you want to fund a certain number of verses.

So far sponsors include: DW user Thnidu, rix_scaedu

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When Something Feels Good

[Wednesday, November 5, 2014]

Mrrhow listens to
the humans to find out where
the cat treats are stored

Napoleon makes
a distraction for humans,
so the coast is clear

Cayenne steals the key,
opens the case, steals the treats,
replaces the key


when something feels good,
even supercats can learn
to cooperate

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  • 3 comments
OMG this is adorable. Those lil bastards!!!
So you know... I knew nothing about haiku. Never took a poetry class.

When I was taking my PhD classes, I had one in Dissertation Prep and our professor enjoyed trying creative pedagogy. There were 3 of us only in the class - me, a 55 yr old black man from Texas, and a young Muslim woman from Libya who had only been learning English for 3 years.

The professor started the first day explaining haiku to us and then having us each write a haiku about "what we have learned in the PdD program so far"

I can't imagine how hard it was to write a haiku for an Arabic woman but she did it. All 3 of us plus the professor wrote our haiku on the board and signed them and shared them. So then for many classes [not all] she would have us start by writing a haiku on a topic, and some classes, she had each of us suggest the topic. It was intended to get your brain reset into "class mode".

We also were to keep a research journal all semester and turn it in. I wrote many haiku in my journal and it helped me get my mind into the dissertation process!
Oh yeah, this is fun. Thank you!