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Poetry Fishbowl Open!
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haikujaguar From: haikujaguar Date: December 17th, 2007 11:01 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh and not many people have left you animals. What about whooping cranes? Or (my perennial favorite), rays?
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: December 17th, 2007 11:38 pm (UTC) (Link)
The whooping cranes and Moose's dragonfly suggested a wetland setting to me. "Swamps, Enlightened" is a free verse poem describing the environment in positive terms and refuting the negative stereotypes. (I know, some swamps *are* spooky, murky, and stinky -- but not all of them.)
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: December 18th, 2007 03:15 am (UTC) (Link)
Your manta rays have been combined with "darkness" from ivy_broom in the unrhymed quatrains of "flying underwater."

... um, I'm not sure I have the right kind of paper to scrap this one for you. I've got "Memories of Winter" and "Letter to a Friend in Florida" done though.
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