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Poem: "The Tree of Damocles"
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From: (Anonymous) Date: December 24th, 2018 12:38 am (UTC) (Link)

Bit of a repeat

Starting here: "You, uh, want some help
carrying all that?" Shiv said.

"That's wonderful!" Tolli said.
"What does yours look like?"

And ending here: "You, uh, want some help
carrying all that?" Shiv said.

"Sure," Simon said, passing
him some of the supplies.
"Let's go to the dining room."

There's a repeat of the previous section.

Thank you for this story/poem, by the way. Merry Christmas Adam!
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: December 24th, 2018 01:36 am (UTC) (Link)

Re: Bit of a repeat

Fixed, thanks!
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