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Poetry Fishbowl Open!

The Poetry Fishbowl is now CLOSED.  Thank you all for your time and attention.  Please keep an eye on this page as I'm still writing.

Starting now, the Poetry Fishbowl is open!  Today's theme is "Poke ALL the bigots in the eye."  I will be checking this page periodically throughout the day. When people make suggestions, I'll pick some and weave them together into a poem ... and then another ... and so on. I'm hoping to get a lot of ideas and a lot of poems.

Click to read the linkback poem "We Will Fade into You" (11 verses, standalone).


What Is a Poetry Fishbowl?

Writing is usually considered a solitary pursuit. One exception to this is a fascinating exercise called a "fishbowl." This has various forms, but all of them basically involve some kind of writing in public, usually with interaction between author and audience. A famous example is Harlan Ellison's series of "stories under glass" in which he sits in a bookstore window and writes a new story based on an idea that someone gives him. Writing classes sometimes include a version where students watch each other write, often with students calling out suggestions which are chalked up on the blackboard for those writing to use as inspiration.

In this online version of a Poetry Fishbowl, I begin by setting a theme; today's theme is "Poke ALL the bigots in the eye." I invite people to suggest characters, settings, and other things relating to that theme. Then I use those prompts as inspiration for writing poems.


Cyberfunded Creativity

I'm practicing cyberfunded creativity. If you enjoy what I'm doing and want to see more of it, please feed the Bard. The following options are currently available:

1) Sponsor the Fishbowl -- Here is a PayPal button for donations. There is no specific requirement, but $1 is the minimum recommended size for PayPal transactions since they take a cut from every one. You can also donate via check or money order sent by postal mail. If you make a donation and tell me about it, I promise to use one of your prompts. Anonymous donations are perfectly welcome, just won't get that perk. General donations will be tallied, and at the end of the fishbowl I’ll post a list of eligible poems based on the total funding; then the audience can vote on which they want to see posted.








2) Swim, Fishie, Swim! -- A feature in conjunction with fishbowl sponsorship is this progress meter showing the amount donated.  There are multiple perks, the top one being a half-price poetry sale on one series when donations reach $300.



3) Buy It Now! -- Gakked from various e-auction sites, this feature allows you to sponsor a specific poem. If you don't want to wait for some editor to buy and publish my poem so you can read it, well, now you don't have to. Sponsoring a poem means that I will immediately post it on my blog for everyone to see, with the name of the sponsor (or another dedicate) if you wish; plus you get a nonexclusive publication right, so you can post it on your own blog or elsewhere as long as you keep the credits intact. You'll need to tell me the title of the poem you want to sponsor. I'm basing the prices on length, and they're comparable to what I typically make selling poetry to magazines (semi-pro rates according to Duotrope's Digest).

0-10 lines: $5
11-25 lines: $10
26-40 lines: $15
41-60 lines: $20
Poems over 60 lines, or with very intricate structure, fall into custom pricing.

4) Commission a scrapbook page. I can render a chosen poem in hardcopy format, on colorful paper, using archival materials for background and any embellishments. This will be suitable for framing or for adding to a scrapbook. Commission details are here.  See latest photos of sample scrapbooked poems: "Sample Scrapbooked Poems 1-24-11"

5) Spread the word. Echo or link to this post on your LiveJournal, other blog, Twitter, Facebook, MySpace, Digg, StumbleUpon, or any other social network.  Useful Twitter hashtags include #poetryfishbowl and #promptcall.  Encourage people to come here and participate in the fishbowl.  If you have room for it, including your own prompt will give your readers an idea of what the prompts should look like; ideally, update later to include the thumbnail of the poem I write, and a link to the poem if it gets published.  If there is at least one new prompter or donor, I will post an extra freebie poem.

Linkback perk: I have a spare series poem available, and each linkback will reveal a verse of the poem.  One person can do multiple links if they're on different services, like Dreamwidth or Twitter, rather than all on LiveJournal.  Comment with a link to where you posted.  "We Will Fade into You" has 11 verses and is a standalone.


Additional Notes

1) I customarily post replies to prompt posts telling people which of their prompts I'm using, with a brief description of the resulting poem(s). If you want to know what's available, watch for those "thumbnails."

2) You don't have to pay me to see a poem based on a prompt that you gave me. I try to send copies of poems to people, mostly using the LJ message function.  (Anonymous prompters will miss this perk unless you give me your eddress.)  These are for-your-eyes-only, though, not for sharing.

3) Sponsors of the Poetry Fishbowl in general, or of specific poems, will gain access to an extra post in appreciation of their generosity.  While you're on the Donors list, you can view all of the custom-locked posts in that category.  Click the "donors" tag to read the archive of those.  I've also posted a list of other donor perks there.  I customarily leave donor names on the list for two months, so you'll get to see the perk-post from this month and next.

4) After the Poetry Fishbowl concludes, I will post a list of unsold poems and their prices, to make it easier for folks to see what they might want to sponsor.

5) If donations total $100 by Friday evening then you get a free $15 poem; $150 gets you a free $20 poem; and $200 gets you a free epic, posted after the Poetry Fishbowl.  These will usually be series poems if I have them; otherwise I may offer non-series poems or series poems in a different size.  If donations reach $250, you get one step toward a bonus fishbowl; three of these activates the perk, and they don't have to be three months in a row.  Everyone will get to vote on which series, and give prompts during the extra fishbowl, although it may be a half-day rather than a whole day.  If donations reach $300, there will be a half-price sale.


Feed the Fish!
Now's your chance to participate in the creative process by posting ideas for me to write about. Today's theme is "Poke ALL the bigots in the eye." I'll be soliciting ideas for bigots, victims, upstanders, ordinary people, the women that men don't see, QUILTBAG folks, people of color, the misunderstood, outcasts, nemeses, bullies, abusers, oppressors, slavers, psycho bosses, troubled relationships, supervillains, superheroes, activists, poking a bigot in the eye, fleeing in terror, picking on people, resisting oppression, speaking truth to power, upsetting applecarts, facing your demons, feeding the right wolf, punching up, protesting, lunch counters, bars, reservations, slums, schools, playgrounds, counseling offices, government buildings, the Oval Office, dark alleys, oceans, liminal zones, mad science labs, The Tower, battlegrounds, graveyards, other places of power, internalized oppression, bigotry, racism, other isms that should be wasms, manifestos, identity literature, picket signs, disruptions, unusual vulnerabilities, minority languages, history written by the losers, radical transformation, the unspeakable, the inescapable, the indestructible, the nature of humanity (or lack thereof), hubris, and poetic forms in particular. But anything is welcome, really. If you manage to recommend a form that I don't recognize, I will probably pounce on it and ask you for its rules. I do have The New Book of Forms by Lewis Turco which covers most common and many obscure forms.

I'll post at least one of the fishbowl poems here so you-all can enjoy it. (Remember, you get an extra freebie poem if someone new posts a prompt or makes a donation, and additional perks at $100-$300 in donations.  Linkbacks reveal verses of "We Will Fade into You."  The rest of the poems will go into my archive for magazine submission.
Tags: #poetryfishbowl, #promptcall, activism, cyberfunded creativity, ethnic studies, fishbowl, gender studies, poetry, reading, weblit, writing
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A backchannel prompt from Shirley Barrette inspired the free-verse poem "Grapes of Thorns." It explores the Catholic Church covering up child abuse.

Hold for original prompter.
Some Dreamwidth prompts inspired the free-verse poem "The Knight of Time." Through the ages, Dr. Infanta has met all kinds of genderqueer people. It's really not a good idea to pick on them in front of her.

147 lines, Buy It Now = $74
The child of a noted bigot writes a well written, well researched, and ultimately influential book refuting and debunking their parent's position
This inspired the free-verse poem "Serpentooth." A young woman refutes her father's position against people with superpowers.

68 lines, Buy It Now = $34

Anonymous

June 7 2017, 01:04:04 UTC 4 years ago

This is janetmiles.


The Unspeakable: "Hello, I'm a Nameless Horror, but you can call me Fred." (This was originally from my friend rahirah, who has some lovely sketches of him. The idea was that a bunch of folks were trying to conjure the Great Old Ones, using the _Reader's Digest Condensed_ version of the _Necronomicon_. In one story, he tried to go a-haunting, got his tentacles wet, and caught cold. There is a charming picture of him sitting with his tentacles in a tub of hot water, a blanket around his not-exactly-shoulders, and a tissue to his not-precisely-a-nose. Poor Fred.)

My current favorite take on the whole typo mess: "On a dark desert highway, cool wind in my hair, warm smell of covfefe rising up through the air." Don't know who said it first.

Not sure if it counts as poking a bigot in the eye, but: the early images of the states / cities that had announced they were complying with the Paris accords (and the occupant could pound sand) looked a lot like an upraised middle finger. Here is one such image: https://www.facebook.com/sillymagpie/posts/10207302221112147

Poking bigots in the eye: Someone starts up a not-for-profit insurance cooperative specifically for QUILTBAG folks who need things like reconstructive surgery and reproductive assistance, and is surprised by the number of het allies who buy policies.

[Huh. Now I'm wondering how many, if any, trans women bank sperm before starting hormone therapy, in case they want to have children at some point.]
Retrieved from spam filter. Annoyingly, the filter does not seem to remove actual spam.

>> [Huh. Now I'm wondering how many, if any, trans women bank sperm before starting hormone therapy, in case they want to have children at some point.] <<

Some do. Ethical health care providers recommend that people at least consider reproductive options prior to the kind of sexual realignment service that would impair or remove the original version. It can pose a barrier for childfree people who don't WANT kids, though; and conversely, some doctors won't mention the options because they don't want transfolk to reproduce or just don't think they'd be interested. And it's only available to relatively well-off people because it's expensive, like gender care in general, and it's not insured. >_<

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A DW prompt inspired the free-verse poem "Differently Abled Heroes." Across the dimensions, it's natural for Schrodinger's Heroes to have varying levels of ability. But it's harder when it's Alex, and not all the reasons for that are obvious.

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Many prompts combined to inspired "We Must Bear Witness." It's a litany about part of Dr. Infanta's intelligence network during WWII, and how they fight back. Curbstomp ALL the facists!

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I packed all of these into "The Emulsification of Humankind." In modern times, the Empire is pretty well merged from a bunch of different cultures. But its past is awful. So how did they get here from there? This poem explores some of the things they have tried.

60 lines, Buy It Now = $20
A backchannel prompt from Shirley Barrette inspired the poem "The Problem with Pence." It's a comparison between him and Trump.

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I still have plenty left to write, but need sleep now.
I wanted to let you know that the thing with the weighted blankets helped us out this morning. We had a rather painful and unsettling experience last night and my wife (who is neurotypical) was having a very difficult time settling down and processing. We don't have weighted blankets but we have heavy buckwheat-hull pillows. I asked if I could put one on her lap and she agreed. Within a few seconds her breathing steadied and her shaking eased up. A half-hour later she was able to sleep. When she started stressing again this afternoon, it helped again.

Thank you for all the PSA stuff you post. This particular one really helped us.
Yay! I'm so happy to hear that. Weighted blankets are popular, but other folks like heavy pillow, stuffed animals, or other things. And yes, neurotypical people can benefit from coping skills too.
A DW prompt inspired the free-verse poem "Big Brother and the Cyberbully." The strength of internet trolls is that they strike from hiding and are hard to reach in person. The weakness is that they're very dependent on the internet. When a cyberbully does grievous damage, a supervillain makes a calculated counterattack.

106 lines, Buy It Now = $53
A DW prompt combined with one of my mother's prompts to inspire the free-verse poem "A Branching Path." Sometimes, a mediocre life can be a pretty good thing.

106 lines, Buy It Now = $53
A DW prompt inspired the free-verse poem "A Disease of Ignorance." Some things are universal, others unique, and one of the things that hasn't changed over time is bigotry. But the Blueshift Troupers know how to handle it.

57 lines, Buy It Now = $20
A DW prompt inspired the free-verse poem "Seeing from a Different Perspective." Shaeth finds out what some of his former followers have been up to, and he doesn't like it.

109 lines, Buy It Now = $55
A DW prompt inspired the free-verse poem "No Power Like the Power of Youth." When racist protesters try to invade a largely black neighborhood, they meet with some serious opposition.

142 lines, Buy It Now = $71
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