Elizabeth Barrette (ysabetwordsmith) wrote,
Elizabeth Barrette
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Poem: "Blood in the Dust"

This poem came from the November 3 poetry fishbowl, inspired by a prompt from talithakalago. You can see that my international audience came out in force this month! "Blood in the Dust" tells the tale of Ned Kelly, a famous Australian outlaw, in ballad form. They had their own "Wild West" scenario with the men called "bushrangers." There are at least two sides to every story, and maybe more than that to this one. I tried to do it justice.


Blood in the Dust


Ned Kelly was a cattleman, though
Whether good or bad
Is debatable, but all agree
He was a rowdy lad.

They say Ned Kelly punched a farmer
Who claimed that he’d been robbed,
And they let Ned go, but after that,
The coppers had him mobbed.

There were many charges issued, but
Half of them came to naught –
Although some say there were mischiefs for
Which Ned was never caught.

In the end it came to shooting at
The creek called Stringybark.
They may say the truth is made of light,
But for him it was dark.

Still the folk recall Ned Kelly for
The fire in his eye,
And they still sing songs about him so
His fame will never die.

They still say “game as Ned Kelly” when
Somebody will not quit,
For the Aussies love their outlaws well
And cheer the odd misfit.

There’s a lesson to Ned Kelly’s tale,
Remember it you must:
If you pick your victim poorly, there
Will be blood in the dust.

When the law is not for everyone,
The judge’s face is black:
You can only push a man so far
Before he pushes back.
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  • 4 comments
Oooooh, I especially love the last verse.
In fact, I wrote that last verse first.
So why did you use "Somebody will not quit" instead oif "Someone will not quit"? Any particular reason?
Because "Somebody will not quit" has the right number of syllables" and "Someone will not quit" doesn't.