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Poetry Fishbowl Open!

The Poetry Fishbowl is now CLOSED.  Thank you for your time and attention.  Keep an eye on this post, as I'm still writing.

Starting now, the Poetry Fishbowl is open!  Today's theme is "schooling vs. education."  I will be checking this page periodically throughout the day. When people make suggestions, I'll pick some and weave them together into a poem ... and then another ... and so on. I'm hoping to get a lot of ideas and a lot of poems.

Click to read the linkback poem  "Mipnei Tikkun Ha'olam" (15 verses, Clay of Life).


What Is a Poetry Fishbowl?

Writing is usually considered a solitary pursuit. One exception to this is a fascinating exercise called a "fishbowl." This has various forms, but all of them basically involve some kind of writing in public, usually with interaction between author and audience. A famous example is Harlan Ellison's series of "stories under glass" in which he sits in a bookstore window and writes a new story based on an idea that someone gives him. Writing classes sometimes include a version where students watch each other write, often with students calling out suggestions which are chalked up on the blackboard for those writing to use as inspiration.

In this online version of a Poetry Fishbowl, I begin by setting a theme; today's theme is "schooling vs. education." I invite people to suggest characters, settings, and other things relating to that theme. Then I use those prompts as inspiration for writing poems.


Cyberfunded Creativity

I'm practicing cyberfunded creativity. If you enjoy what I'm doing and want to see more of it, please feed the Bard. The following options are currently available:

1) Sponsor the Fishbowl -- Here is a PayPal button for donations. There is no specific requirement, but $1 is the minimum recommended size for PayPal transactions since they take a cut from every one. You can also donate via check or money order sent by postal mail. If you make a donation and tell me about it, I promise to use one of your prompts. Anonymous donations are perfectly welcome, just won't get that perk. General donations will be tallied, and at the end of the fishbowl I’ll post a list of eligible poems based on the total funding; then the audience can vote on which they want to see posted.





2) Swim, Fishie, Swim! -- A feature in conjunction with fishbowl sponsorship is this progress meter showing the amount donated.  There are multiple perks, the top one being a half-price poetry sale on one series when donations reach $300.



3) Buy It Now! -- Gakked from various e-auction sites, this feature allows you to sponsor a specific poem. If you don't want to wait for some editor to buy and publish my poem so you can read it, well, now you don't have to. Sponsoring a poem means that I will immediately post it on my blog for everyone to see, with the name of the sponsor (or another dedicate) if you wish; plus you get a nonexclusive publication right, so you can post it on your own blog or elsewhere as long as you keep the credits intact. You'll need to tell me the title of the poem you want to sponsor. I'm basing the prices on length, and they're comparable to what I typically make selling poetry to magazines (semi-pro rates according to Duotrope's Digest).

0-10 lines: $5
11-25 lines: $10
26-40 lines: $15
41-60 lines: $20
Poems over 60 lines, or with very intricate structure, fall into custom pricing.

4) Commission a scrapbook page. I can render a chosen poem in hardcopy format, on colorful paper, using archival materials for background and any embellishments. This will be suitable for framing or for adding to a scrapbook. Commission details are here.  See latest photos of sample scrapbooked poems: "Sample Scrapbooked Poems 1-24-11"

5) Spread the word. Echo or link to this post on your LiveJournal, other blog, Twitter, Facebook, MySpace, Digg, StumbleUpon, or any other social network.  Useful Twitter hashtags include #poetryfishbowl and #promptcall.  Encourage people to come here and participate in the fishbowl.  If you have room for it, including your own prompt will give your readers an idea of what the prompts should look like; ideally, update later to include the thumbnail of the poem I write, and a link to the poem if it gets published.  If there is at least one new prompter or donor, I will post an extra freebie poem.

Linkback perk: I have a spare series poem available, and each linkback will reveal a verse of the poem.  One person can do multiple links if they're on different services, like Dreamwidth or Twitter, rather than all on LiveJournal.  Comment with a link to where you posted.  "Mipnei Tikkun Ha'olam" belongs to the series Clay of Life and has 15 verses available.


Additional Notes

1) I customarily post replies to prompt posts telling people which of their prompts I'm using, with a brief description of the resulting poem(s). If you want to know what's available, watch for those "thumbnails."

2) You don't have to pay me to see a poem based on a prompt that you gave me. I try to send copies of poems to people, mostly using the LJ message function.  (Anonymous prompters will miss this perk unless you give me your eddress.)  These are for-your-eyes-only, though, not for sharing.

3) Sponsors of the Poetry Fishbowl in general, or of specific poems, will gain access to an extra post in appreciation of their generosity.  While you're on the Donors list, you can view all of the custom-locked posts in that category.  Click the "donors" tag to read the archive of those.  I've also posted a list of other donor perks there.  I customarily leave donor names on the list for two months, so you'll get to see the perk-post from this month and next.

4) After the Poetry Fishbowl concludes, I will post a list of unsold poems and their prices, to make it easier for folks to see what they might want to sponsor.

5) If donations total $100 by Friday evening then you get a free $15 poem; $150 gets you a free $20 poem; and $200 gets you a free epic, posted after the Poetry Fishbowl.  These will usually be series poems if I have them; otherwise I may offer non-series poems or series poems in a different size.  If donations reach $250, you get one step toward a bonus fishbowl; three of these activates the perk, and they don't have to be three months in a row.  Everyone will get to vote on which series, and give prompts during the extra fishbowl, although it may be a half-day rather than a whole day.  If donations reach $300, there will be a half-price sale in one series.


Feed the Fish!
Now's your chance to participate in the creative process by posting ideas for me to write about. Today's theme is "schooling vs. education."  I'll be soliciting ideas for teachers, students, autodidacts, activists, experts, novices, education coaches for independent learners, people who design educational systems, librarians, coaches, presenters who teach what they know in a freestyle context, parents and grandparents, club leaders, role models, teaching, learning, asking questions, looking up answers, choosing a topic, making a lesson plan, reading, writing, learning by doing, making mistakes and learning from them, challenging assumptions, public schools, private schools, alternative school systems such as Montessori or Waldorf, universities, libraries, bookstores, coffeehouses and ice cream parlors, community centers, gymnasiums, parks, playgrounds, zoos, museums, exploratorium museums, cultural centers, historic sites, learning modes, different types of intelligence, life lessons, activity clubs, sensory toys, educational toys, and poetic forms in particular. But anything is welcome, really. If you manage to recommend a form that I don't recognize, I will probably pounce on it and ask you for its rules. I do have The New Book of Forms by Lewis Turco which covers most common and many obscure forms.

I'll post at least one of the fishbowl poems here so you-all can enjoy it. (Remember, you get an extra freebie poem if someone new posts a prompt or makes a donation, and additional perks at $100-$300 in donations.  Linkbacks reveal verses of "Mipnei Tikkun Ha'olam.") The rest of the poems will go into my archive for magazine submission.
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A backchannel prompt from Shirley Barrette inspired the free-verse poem "Learning to Fish." It's about the wide array of things I learned while discovering how to catch fish.

Reserved for prompter.
Absent-minded professors

Scantron abuse (which for me generally means Scantron forms that look as though they were used to mop up coffee and then stuffed in a backpack for several months, but which you are welcome to interpret however you like)

How did you find my village?! NOTE to readers: Dr. Tran is not safe for most workplaces. I use this phrase (to my colleagues after I wrap up the call, not the callers!) when people call me with questions like, "I've heard you can attend for free if you donate your body to the Body Farm; is that true?" (Answer: "I have never heard that to be the case. I'll transfer you to the Admissions office.")

Montessori, Waldorf, Summerhill, and other "non-traditional" school systems

Home-schooling

"Don't let your schooling get in the way of your education" (Twain?)
Your prompt about homeschooling and alternative schools inspired the free-verse poem "A Hope and a Promise." Aidan and Saraphina return to Easy City to visit Arlene. She suggests the local Montessori school as a safe place for a meeting, since the berettaflies have made everyone leery of going outdoors even with the warning dropped to Green. What follows is a warm fluffy exploration of a really awesome school, where the grownups are not just tolerant but supportive of children's differences. There's a little angst due to their life challenges but it's mostly sweet.

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A backchannel prompt from Shirley Barrette inspired the free-verse poem "Bifocal Cooking." It compares recipe vs. intuitive cooking styles.

Reserved for prompter.
A backchannel prompt from Anthony Barrette inspired the free-verse poem "Education Is What Survives." In which Contretemps is a magnificent bastard who encourages people's selfish nature for his own benefit, and we see an example of why it's so difficult to get anything designed for people with superpowers.

Reserved for prompter.

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Your prompt about Pain's Gray inspired the free-verse poem "For the Sake of Reformation." Zhonn screws up. He has the interesting quirk of using pain as a mnemonic, but there are reasons why using a regular switch is risky for him. So Zhonn and Ricasso ask to make use of Gray's superpower as a safer alternative. Graphic physical discipline, a little angst, but they're actually taking great care of each other.

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The evolution of "The Three R's" from teaching technique (Recitation, Repetition, Repression) to subject matter (Reading, 'Riting, and 'Rithmetic -- to the complete disregarding of spelling).

The most important thing one can be taught is how to learn.

Book learning vs. field experience.

A couple of your prompts combined into "3Rs and 1 L." It's a look at how education has changed, how it hasn't, and what it's hiding.

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Things you learn at school that aren't on the curriculum.

Learning to teach.

The place of example in learning and education.
This contributed to "The Conditions in Which They Can Learn," today's freebie.
Shiv has been getting quite the education. I'm not sure he'd react so well in a traditional classroom setting.

Ashley decides she wants to learn more about her new self.

Eric and Teejay in and out of school. (Perhaps skipping school for a good reason?)

Poem

ysabetwordsmith

May 4 2016, 01:01:41 UTC 5 years ago Edited:  May 4 2016, 01:52:29 UTC

Your Shiv prompt inspired the free-verse poem "Dichroic." Tolliver and Simon bring something new to the art room for Shiv to explore, and he learns more than he expected to -- or anyone else expected, either. He's finally starting to realize that his crappy past experiences are not all there is to education.

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Available for posting after "Whose Lives Are Quite Different," "Never Quite So Alone Again," "The Passport to the Future," "The Great Art of Life," and "The Passport to the Future" have been sponsored and published.

Poem

ysabetwordsmith

5 years ago

technoshaman

May 3 2016, 20:36:38 UTC 5 years ago Edited:  May 3 2016, 20:36:55 UTC

Linkback link isn't active... (Boosted on Facebook...)
It's up now, beginning with your verse.

Re: Okay...

technoshaman

5 years ago

You invited someone to prompt for "Mr. Grenade and Hadyn practicing", off your Finish It Bingo card. I'm taking you up on it.

I'm also looking at V and Spalling, over on a portal planet with a ciphernet node, that's still a likely assembly point for the Orion Combined Forces. They've both had schooling and education, and have been through a lot. Not sure what they're working out, but they're in a prime spot for observing, and definitely inclined to apply their backgrounds to what they observe. What are they doing, and what are they teaching each other?
In "The Best of All Instructors," Hadyn and Mr. Grenade learn about camping, cooking, and Self-Detonation. They're both scared, for different reasons. They both get over it. This poem is fluff, lightly seasoned with angst.

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Re: Prompts

ysabetwordsmith

5 years ago

I shared on Facebook the story of an Australian teacher--she was on an airplane and a special needs teen was feeling sick and wouldn't get off the floor and take his seat for landing. The pilot thought, if there was a medical emergency I'd ask for a doctor, and so he asked if there was a special needs teacher on board. It seems to me that special needs teachers might be very helpful to young soups.

I'm also imagining that in some universe kinder than our own, such people might be on call to help police with young people and people with special needs.

* * *

The contrast between people who assertively learn as much as they can their whole lives, but don't have a degree and people who have the piece of paper, but not nearly as much knowledge. Both kinds of people face challenges in a world where the paper is presumed to equate with knowledge.

* * *

Learning magic
Your special needs prompt inspired the free-verse poem "Proximity and Separation." An in-flight incident attracts Ansel's attention and he volunteers to help with a boy who can't tolerate sitting up in an airplane. But there might be more to this than meets the eye ...

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wyld_dandelyon

5 years ago

Science Schools Vs Guilds

Sink or Swim

Making sure mentorships go both ways.

Your mentoring prompt inspired the free-verse poem "To Acknowledge Our Interdependence." Ansel comes home grouchy and uncomfortable after a nasty encounter. Turq proves surprisingly resourceful at teaching him how to cope with it.

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This seems like it would fit well into Steamsmith or Path of the Paladin, or Frankenstein's Family, along with those others have suggested. Lots of people learning things in not necessarily traditional ways in your stories. :-)

Perhaps correspondence courses, "school of life", or learning from someone who's surprised they can teach.

"God grant me the wisdom to teach those I can, the strength to redirect those I can't, and the insight to know the difference."
Several bits of your prompts worked into "The Best of All Instructors," thumbnailed elsewhere.
From Dreamwidth, an Audre Lorde quote reminded me of how I approach not just writing but also teaching. Because giving voice to the voiceless -- whether by writing about them, or teaching them to write -- is a profound act of subversion. "Passing Knowledge" is written in free verse.

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Linked on facebook.

Said to a priestess I know once upon a time: "You aren't a teacher, you're a mentor. You don't tell us what to do, you'll help us figure it out for ourselves."

Experiential learning as opposed to formal instruction.

Things learned while studying something else entirely.

Someone who has read and studied widely learning how the world actually works.

The difference between reading/hearing about something and actually experiencing it. I'm thinking of a child who's grown up in a cloister discovering the market she's only read about.
For experiential learning, see "The Best of All Instructors."
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