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Poem: "The Taste of Rust"
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ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: August 8th, 2014 07:45 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thoughts

>> Sorrow and empathy, and hope that Shiv finds, eventually, a good way out of his vortex. <<

That would take a LOT of work. This is the dude who thought it was a dandy idea to stick a knife in an Unsullied Hero and wants to do it again. Shiv is not in a malleable state, so something would have to change that.

Hmm ... might have an idea for that, eventually.

>> • When someone hits hard and doesn't get up
-> gets hit hard <<

I rephrased this a different way. It was actually Shiv hitting the bricks, not Stalwart Stan hitting Shiv, that did the damage.
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