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The Wordsmith's Forge
The Writing & Other Projects of Elizabeth Barrette
Poem: "When the Road Is Bent"
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thnidu From: thnidu Date: June 24th, 2014 06:06 am (UTC) (Link)
I'm looking forward to this!

• reknowned metalsmiths
-> renowned

• Gypsy Vanners comprise a breed
comprise -> are / make up / constitute
> I don't accept the complete semantic reversal that "comprise" is being put through. The larger comprises the smaller.

• slected for different weights
-> selected
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: June 24th, 2014 06:21 am (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!

I'm glad you liked this. Typos have been fixed.
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