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Poem: "Power Play" - The Wordsmith's Forge
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Poem: "Power Play"
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thnidu From: thnidu Date: April 22nd, 2014 04:06 am (UTC) (Link)
Nice to see them as kids playing together and learning about each other, and maybe themselves.

Minor typo:
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Edited at 2014-04-22 04:07 am (UTC)
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: April 22nd, 2014 06:26 am (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!

>> Nice to see them as kids playing together and learning about each other, and maybe themselves. <<

I'm glad you liked this. Not all superpower stuff is about saving the world. Sometimes it's everyday stuff too.

>> Minor typo:
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Fixed.
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