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Poem: "Heroes Still Living"
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ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: July 22nd, 2014 10:56 pm (UTC) (Link)

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>> How the heck did I miss this one? <<

It's easy for things to slip through the cracks.

>> Very unusual (to me, anyway) form, but it works, especially in Polychrome Heroics. I missed the assonance, but the alliteration really works. Neat! <<

Yay! I like using some of the unusual and archaic forms.
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