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Poem: "Peace Offerings" - The Wordsmith's Forge
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Poem: "Peace Offerings"
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From: technoshaman Date: May 11th, 2014 02:58 am (UTC) (Link)
Further prompt, perhaps to save for later... Valor's Widow gets feedback from her class, and figures out how to address Bully Boy directly?

Like this one.
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: June 2nd, 2014 09:41 pm (UTC) (Link)

Well...

That side of the conversation does need to happen. Catch is, they're the wrong pairing for it. Valor's Widow doesn't really know how to address young boys, and Bully Boy wouldn't listen to her anyway. What Bully Boy really needs is for an older man to take him aside and explain that his behavior is unacceptable. Extant possibilities include the Rescuer and Savoir Faire. I've got a couple of new characters too, my good cops, Fiddlesticks (a soup) and his sidekick Hefty (a supernary).
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