Elizabeth Barrette (ysabetwordsmith) wrote,
Elizabeth Barrette
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Poem: "The Island Dragons"

This poem came out of the March 4, 2014 Poetry Fishbowl.  It was inspired and sponsored by Anthony & Shirley Barrette.  You can read more about Komodo dragons online.


The Island Dragons


On a chain of islands in Indonesia,
there are dragons.

Some people say that
they are just giant lizards,
but look --

they have the armored hide,
the powerful sweeping tail,
the razor teeth and claws,
the long forked tongue,
the vicious temper.

They have the poisonous blood
and the toxic bite too,
mysterious and potent.

They live in blasted land --
barren fields, stunted forests,
smouldering volcanic wastes.

They grow larger than a man.

You can say that dragons
only exist in fairytales,

but the lords of Komodo
just tilt their gilded eyes
and give a hissing laugh.

To them you are only food.

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When I see young people discouraged because their movement didn't win dramatically, on the first try (salute to OWS!) here's the metaphor that comes to mind:


waves with foam and force
fail against the rocks.
another wave always comes.
the rock's lost molecules
never come back
then "suddenly"
the rock comes down.
One of my first computer screens was a Komodo. It took me years to get the joke: MONITOR Lizard.

What was that about here there be dragons? :)
That is so awesome.

natf

March 8 2014, 23:35:32 UTC 7 years ago Edited:  March 8 2014, 23:36:14 UTC

Sadly though Komodos do not fly (don't even have wings) or have breath weapons (fire, ice, acid or…).
>> Sadly though Komodos do not fly (don't even have wings) <<

Flight is optional for dragons. Eastern dragons don't have wings, for example, and neither do many other types.

>> or have breath weapons (fire, ice, acid or…). <<

That they do have. Komodo dragon bites tend to be rapidly fatal; their spit and breath can cause problems too. People are still arguing over exactly how and why this works. Among the leading theories are venom and hyperactive bacteria. My suspicion is that it's a combination of factors. Some studies suggest that their blood is toxic due to bacteria which do not bother the dragons but are harmful to other creatures. Trouble is, it's very difficult to replicate results when studying them. One team will find something, another tries to verify it, and may get similar results or totally different results. Which kind of makes me suspect a magical factor in play, because magic can make science go haywire.
ISTR reading that a Komodo dragon's bite will fester and not heal (absent prompt medical treatment, which is EXTREMELY recent to evolution), and that the dragon, which is not quick of foot because it doesn't need to be, just follows along till the victim collapses, or slows down enough for the dragon to finish the job and start the meal.

At Dragon Systems, one of our projects was code-named Komodo. I think it was one of the release versions of Dragon NaturallySpeaking.
(Place of origin of my familiar Loiosh, pictured.)
That's so cute.
Loiosh flies to your shoulder and gives your earlobe a gentle affectionate nibble.
*pet pet pet*
>> ISTR reading that a Komodo dragon's bite will fester and not heal (absent prompt medical treatment, which is EXTREMELY recent to evolution), <<

I've read various iterations of that, and medical treatment is difficult because of the competing theories of what actually causes the problem.

>> and that the dragon, which is not quick of foot because it doesn't need to be, just follows along till the victim collapses, or slows down enough for the dragon to finish the job and start the meal. <<

Exactly. It's a useful hunting technique. Plus they enjoy carrion, so it's fine whether the dragon catches up to the prey after a few hours, or a few days.