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Poem: "Valor's Widow"
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From: idhren24 Date: February 21st, 2014 04:53 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oh, there are some lovely turns of phrase here: "sea-color lit with sorrow", "whispers that follow [..] like wave-song in seashells", etc. I also like the deft characterization lines ("not one to look back / on what might have been" & "She made her choice" / "she will abide by it") and the hints of what kind of relationship Deirdre & Captain Valor shared that they planned that contingency beforehand.

Thank you for sharing this.
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: February 22nd, 2014 06:43 am (UTC) (Link)

You're welcome!

>> Oh, there are some lovely turns of phrase here: <<

That's good to hear.

>> and the hints of what kind of relationship Deirdre & Captain Valor shared that they planned that contingency beforehand. <<

Sooth. In a sense, she was always part of the superheroing, even with any powers of her own -- because she was helping him shoulder the weight.

>> Thank you for sharing this. <<

I'm glad you liked it.
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