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Poem: "Inifinitesimal Divinities"
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natf From: natf Date: December 8th, 2013 03:13 pm (UTC) (Link)
I am not usually one for lots of rhyming (although I do like Shakespeare's iambic pentameter) but love how punchy the indriso can be. Also, I am loving the themes of this irreverant fishbowl!
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: December 8th, 2013 09:15 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thoughts

>> I am not usually one for lots of rhyming <<

That's okay; some people find it distracting.

>> (although I do like Shakespeare's iambic pentameter) <<

It's very good for serious subjects. I've written a number of sonnets and really like the form ...

>> but love how punchy the indriso can be. <<

... and its miniaturized version, for this reason.

>> Also, I am loving the themes of this irreverant fishbowl! <<

Yay! It did go to some fascinating places.
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