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The Writing & Other Projects of Elizabeth Barrette
Poem: "Through the Haze"
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From: technoshaman Date: July 6th, 2013 05:52 am (UTC) (Link)
Oooooooh! That was sneaky, and an interesting way of rendering it...

And suddenly I remembered *why* ....

Thank you.
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: July 6th, 2013 05:54 am (UTC) (Link)


>>Oooooooh! That was sneaky, and an interesting way of rendering it...<<

Which aspect? It's a long poem; unpacking a little more would help.
From: technoshaman Date: September 2nd, 2013 09:57 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Thoughts

Simply using dashes, not any further labeling other than changes in tone and glimpses of Other... no warning of change of Front, no more than they have....
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: September 3rd, 2013 08:07 am (UTC) (Link)

Re: Thoughts

Thanks. The original version has different fonts, but I couldn't get the blog to do it. I also didn't feel it would be right to use the names before they really knew who they were. Later in the series, I can put the names in at the beginning of each section, to make it easier to track.
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