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Poem: "Not Far from the Tree"
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marina_bonomi From: marina_bonomi Date: July 4th, 2013 07:48 pm (UTC) (Link)
Very well done! The dynamics ring so true! :)

'tourists' rings a bit modern to me, I was expecting 'travellers' or suchlike...

ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: July 5th, 2013 01:07 am (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!

>> Very well done! The dynamics ring so true! :) <<

Yay! I'm glad to hear that.

>> 'tourists' rings a bit modern to me, I was expecting 'travellers' or suchlike... <<

Fixed, thanks.
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