Elizabeth Barrette (ysabetwordsmith) wrote,
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Stacking vs. Not Stacking

Here's an interesting essay about why not to stack atypical character traits.  This is sometimes referred to as Twofer Token Minority.  It's particularly pesky when they're sidekicks instead of main characters.

The thing is ... there are people with multiple minority traits.  There are gay Asians.  There are autistic Pagans.  There are poor black lesbians in wheelchairs.  And those people sometimes feel overlooked because the stacking effect can change their experiences so much that a single-trait character doesn't feel much like them.  I've read essays upholding this end of the debate but couldn't find one to use as an example here.

My stance is that I write characters as they need to be.  I have a lot of characters who are female/other trait because roughly half of humanity is female.  Other combinations are less common but also appear.  Brelig is a normal-sized Duurludirj man (which we'd consider a dwarf) and missing one hand.  Maryam Smith is African-British, genderqueer, duoclass, and of illegitimate birth.  I'm more likely to focus on minority protagonists than to use them as filler, something my audience seems to enjoy if you look over what's been published.  I don't tend to write a lot of straight white Christian men, though, so the core of the mainstream doesn't get a lot of traffic from me.  Meh.  

Also, if I haven't specified a trait in canon, yes it could  fall outside the mainstream.  Characters have done this to me often enough, and my cultural awareness is diverse enough, that there's no permanent default.  They may pop out an uncommon religion or sexual orientation or invisible handicap or whatnot, and they may do that after two stories or six poems or twenty years.  I'm more likely to mention physical features such as skin tone and gender up front, because they're noticeable points of diversity.  But I've also had characters refuse to reveal their sex/gender, and not just the ones for whom "I'm not telling" is  their gender.

I'm interested in other people's perspectives on the matter of single vs. stacked traits.
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The icon is from Avatar, but the fandom I was talking about is Jak and Daxter. (The icon I'm using now is from J&D.) There's no canon evidence either way, but most of fandom used to write Jak's alternate physical states (with implied altered mental state) as having their own personalities, often following the pattern you described in your article about Harvey Dent. A few years ago, a then-BNF posted a story based on the idea that Jak was a singlet and bore full responsibility for everything his body did. Following that story, I think most fans have taken to writing Jak as experiencing an altered mental state rather than switching over to someone else, which isn't what the then-BNF posited, but it has no less canon support than anything else.

I don't think anyone ever wrote multiple!Jak as a multiple system. It's... you know the pattern where people write a real minority experience as if it's a fantasy experience, or a close-to-real experience as if it's completely unreal? Fandom has treated Jak like that. (To be fair, it's not as if you could interpret canon as portraying a typical multiple system at all.)
Wow. The first J&D game was one of the last console games I ever played. Things have obviously changed; I feel so old.

That's really interesting though! I'd be interested in seeing multi!Jak, though my information is obviously waaaaaay outudated. I just remember Jak as another mute video game protagonist in a platformer.
LOL! I don't know many people now who are familiar with the first game but not the turn the series took. Would you believe the second game is set in a futuristic high-tech post-apocalyptic dystopian city-state with a plot focused on politics, war and time travel? Here's the Jak II TVTropes entry because the art there speaks for itself.

(I wish I could see your face when you read this.)

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