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Poem: "Todo lo que Brilla"
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ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: April 7th, 2013 01:52 am (UTC) (Link)

Fixed!

>>I always liked the idea of quipu!<<

Me too, it's such a cool idea.

>>Minor nitpick: The priests stretched the explorer
over and altar and flayed the skin from his body.

Maybe "over AN altar"?<<

Got it, thanks.
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