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Poem: "Because I Can"
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From: (Anonymous) Date: December 9th, 2014 08:10 pm (UTC) (Link)
There are the little soot-faced imps that eat luck,
the ones she runs down without hesitation
when she can catch them unawares,
crunching them cockroaches beneath her wheels.

Last line should be 'crunching them like cockroaches' I think

Lovely poem, you have all my love for this series

--Anna Libertas (from Ao3)
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: December 10th, 2014 10:04 am (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!

>> Last line should be 'crunching them like cockroaches' I think <<

Fixed.

>> Lovely poem, you have all my love for this series <<

Yay! I'm glad you like it.
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