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Poem: "One Day at a Time"

This poem came from the March 5, 2013 Poetry Fishbowl.  It has been inspired and sponsored by laffingkat.  It belongs to the series One God's Story of Mid-Life Crisis.

One Day at a Time

It is Glenta who teaches them
how to get rid of things --
old doubts and worries,
shadows of the past.

These are things that can be
scoured out like dusty corners,
beaten like a rug caked with dried mud,
boiled clean like a cauldron after cooking.

Shaeth is shocked to discover
how much power the old woman
can pinch between her wrinkled fingertips
without so much as touching him for help.

Trobby is amazed to realize
how much better he feels
after wiping down the bits of broken glass
that pass for a window in their shack of a temple.

They're cantrips,  only cleaning cantrips,
such as any peasant might know to cast;
but in her hands they're magic,
blessing and benison and forgiveness.

Twilight finds them both on the floor,
scrubbing with more will than they've had in ages,
when Glenta bends down to stop them
as gently and firmly as she started them.

Trobby's knuckles are raw from harsh soap.
Shaeth, somehow, has an actual backache.
"Enough," Glenta says, "enough for now.
You need to take this one day at a time."

Shaeth tells her to put that in the codex too.

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catsittingstill From: catsittingstill Date: March 7th, 2013 01:18 am (UTC) (Link)
I like this.

Sometimes when I was bummed I used to move the furniture. The combination of heavy exercise and visibly changing something in my space made me feel better. Probably didn't hurt that I had to do some cleaning to be able to move things around.
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: March 7th, 2013 01:24 am (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!

Physical action coupled with magical or meditative intent can make definite changes.
thnidu From: thnidu Date: October 15th, 2013 12:12 am (UTC) (Link)

Re: Thank you!

... Which reminds me of what I meant to do tonight. I'll make a note of where I am in Shaeth's story and continue tomorrow.

:-) Thank you.
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: October 15th, 2013 12:13 am (UTC) (Link)

Re: Thank you!

I'm glad I could help.
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