This poem came out of the February 5, 2013 Poetry Fishbowl. It was inspired by a prompt from moonwolf1988. It has been sponsored by
janetmiles. You can read more about the villanelle form online.
-- a villanelle
It hurt more than the assassin's knife,
which he survived -- he's a tough old thing --
it hurt more than losing his sweet wife.
He buried his son, the wailing fife
piercing his ears like a hornet's sting.
It hurt more than the assassin's knife.
He gave up retirement, once rife
with relaxation, again the king --
it hurt more than losing his sweet wife.
The crown was a gold garland of strife
that gave him headaches, the wretched thing.
It hurt more than the assassin's knife.
He needed a new heir, a new life
to follow him, but gaining that ring --
it hurt more than losing his sweet wife.
In the gardens he planted loosestrife,
his sorrow blossoming with each spring.
It hurt more than the assassin's knife;
it hurt more than losing his sweet wife.
February 7 2013, 08:22:00 UTC 8 years ago
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February 7 2013, 08:23:47 UTC 8 years ago