Elizabeth Barrette (ysabetwordsmith) wrote,
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Poem: "Not One Soul Be Lost"

This poem came out of the October 2-3, 2012 Poetry Fishbowl.  It was inspired by haikujaguar, Anthony & Shirley Barrette.  It also fills the "sacrifice" square on my card for the Hurt/Comfort Bingo fest.  It has been sponsored by Anthony & Shirley Barrette.


Not One Soul Be Lost


When God spoke of His plan
to redeem humankind through
the sacrifice of Jesus Christ,
Lucifer objected to the flaws.
He proposed a safer plan,
by which not one soul be lost.

God refused.  He insisted
that free will come with consequences,
that souls must have the option
of being lost to the void.

So the Lightbringer
turned his back on Heaven,
walked away from the golden throne
and carried his blazing torch
into the darkness of the void.

There Lucifer built a place
for all the castoff souls
who would not go to Heaven.
He swore that Hell
would become for each of those souls
whatever they wanted or needed it to be,
and that he would always keep it open
for whomever chose to enter, for any reason.

Then Jesus Christ was sent to Earth,
and tormented there,
where He hung on the cross for hours
before finally dying --
and then He went home to Heaven,
done with His mortal task.

Lucifer has been in Hell for millennia.
He has created countless demons,
one for every human born,
so that nobody need walk alone
no matter how wicked their choices
or how far from God they might roam.

 

It hurts,
to remember Heaven
as it was before the sundering,
to be so far from the center of all that is.

It burns,
to see what some souls
have required Hell to become;
but all that brings light must burn for it.

This is Lucifer's sacrifice,
every moment of every day,
ensuring that the whole of humanity
is kept company throughout existence,
whatever the cost.

It hurts, it burns,
but the Lightbringer is a shining thing
by whose grace and whose sacrifice

not one soul be lost.

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Very Marriage of Heaven and Hell like!

That it is. I'm glad you like this.
Like and dislike don't entirely describe how I feel. As a non-Christian - and as someone who's been cast in that uncomfortable villain role a lot - the most difficult part of Christianity for me to wrap my head around are concepts about Lucifer, Hell, wars in Heaven, Jesus as basically a game piece or strategy. (My nice ex-LDS friends assure me that Christianity gets even weirder in places.) Honestly it makes me squirm, so seeing someone play around with these ideas is incredibly interesting (okay, other than the guys who made the skirmish level angel vs. devil wargame - that one doesn't count!).

Short form, I liked it.
>>Like and dislike don't entirely describe how I feel.<<

I often use "appreciate" in such circumstances.

>>As a non-Christian - and as someone who's been cast in that uncomfortable villain role a lot <<

Ironically, I'm not Christian either. I just happen to like playing with some of their mythology about angels and demons.

>>the most difficult part of Christianity for me to wrap my head around are concepts about Lucifer, Hell, wars in Heaven, Jesus as basically a game piece or strategy.<<

That's more Zoroastrian than Christian, actually, but it got rolled into the later religion.

>> (My nice ex-LDS friends assure me that Christianity gets even weirder in places.) <<

Much. The Dark Ages and Middle Ages were fraught with heresies in which Christians practiced pretty much every weird cult idea known.

>>Honestly it makes me squirm, so seeing someone play around with these ideas is incredibly interesting (okay, other than the guys who made the skirmish level angel vs. devil wargame - that one doesn't count!).<<

I've seen angels and devils appear in a variety of games, sometimes to great effect.
I like, but then I would... I've always seen Lucifer as being more sinned against than sinning.
I'm happy to hear this. I like alternate versions of Lucifer too.

Re: Yay!

siliconshaman

December 15 2012, 19:23:03 UTC 8 years ago Edited:  December 15 2012, 19:26:11 UTC

I take it you've seen the "good guy Lucifer" series of memes?

Oh hey, now there's a thought! Imagine if Lucifer, in all his Fallen Glory, came through the Tef?! Just how accepting are the heroes?
>>I take it you've seen the "good guy Lucifer" series of memes?<<

I've seen a variety of examples along those lines, but specific memes, no.

>>Oh hey, now there's a thought! Imagine if Lucifer, in all his Fallen Glory, came through the Tef?!<<

That could be fun. Feel free to prompt me for it sometime.

>> Just how accepting are the heroes? <<

As long as someone isn't causing deliberate harm, they're very tolerant. They've put up with Bruce Banner and Sherlock Holmes. Sheesh, they've even put up with Chris' asshole cousins to a limited extent. But they did vote General Ross off the planet.

Lucifer as a neutral or misunderstood-positive force, no problem. Lucifer looking to stir trouble is likely to get his ass handed to him like all the other villains.