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Poem: "It Comes First and Follows After"
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ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: September 21st, 2012 05:07 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!

>> *brrr* I can really feel the goosebumps rising on my arms. <<

Yay! This has turned out to be one of the more high-impact poems from the batch.

>> The imagery reminds me of the shadow of death passing over ancient Egypt in the bible, and the houses that were spared. <<

I was thinking of that, a bit.
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