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Poem: "It Comes First and Follows After"
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ladymondegreen From: ladymondegreen Date: September 21st, 2012 03:24 pm (UTC) (Link)
*brrr* I can really feel the goosebumps rising on my arms.

The imagery reminds me of the shadow of death passing over ancient Egypt in the bible, and the houses that were spared.
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: September 21st, 2012 05:07 pm (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!

>> *brrr* I can really feel the goosebumps rising on my arms. <<

Yay! This has turned out to be one of the more high-impact poems from the batch.

>> The imagery reminds me of the shadow of death passing over ancient Egypt in the bible, and the houses that were spared. <<

I was thinking of that, a bit.
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