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Poem: "The Gods of Sheep and Machines"

This poem came out of the August 7, 2012 Poetry Fishbowl.  It was inspired by a prompt from aldersprig and sponsored by rix_scaedu.  Usually the idea of a machine god is portrayed in a negative light ... but there are some things that machines do quite well.  You can read more about the indriso form online.


The Gods of Sheep and Machines
-- an indriso


The King of Kings is thoughtless in His way,
who lets His shepherds beat His bleating sheep
and speak against His strictures when they pray.

The God of the Machines may never weep
but neither lets mistakes go as they say;
His rules the wizard-priests are bound  to keep.

As sheep are fleeced, the old gods pass away.

The hands of science measure all they sweep.

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I never quite understand a friend I play D&D with who thinks the priests would tell the gods what to do. Who's setting the rules after all?
Not only do the gods make the rules, they also supply the power -- that's the key different between priests and wizards. Hence the vital importance of making sure that priest and deity want the same things, in a magical setting.

Though it carries over here too. The Christians have an appallingly low percentage of clergy who can actually do the magic they're supposed to be doing. Most of them have no charge at all. I suspect some of them just don't think of it as anything more than a pretty story, but I'll bet they lose another big chunk to people who believe it but are pulling in the wrong direction so it doesn't work for them. The ones who can really do it, they tend to stand out. A few of them are capable of raising quite a lot of power.
I think we lose something when social work, good works and other things take over completely from mystery. It's not that those things aren't important but...
I think it's important to have both secular and spiritual options for such things. Some people do better with one, some with the other. Mystery dwells at the bottom of all things, though; it's just a matter of going far enough to find it.
It's disappointing though if someone tells you "we shouldn't be looking for that" in just the place you thought it should be. Or seems to deny the need for mystery at all.
Well, that's their choice. I'm not inclined to drag them along where they don't want to go, unless they mean me harm. But it's never stopped me from going on my own, nor from bringing back bits of wonder with me.
Who said it, in not quite those words, was the disappointment.
Ah, so. Sometimes we wish better of those near to us, than they are ready to deliver. That is always disappointing. For me, it is my nature to run and find out. I cannot be around people who try to hold me back. I may regret leaving some of them, but I can't be something I'm not.
I decided to quietly differ in opinion.
Sometimes, that's what does the least damage.
I'd make it subtle at first. I'd rule he doesn't get certain spells. If he complains, I shrug. "Maybe something's wrong. Maybe your god isn't feeling like it today."

Then come the dreams. Vague. Then messages. Then visions.

See which way he runs: toward the character's god, or toward some other idea in his head. Let's see if he responds to a different god who happens to align better with his behavior.

... or is that actually a god, and not, say, a lord of demons who wishes to corrupt the priesthood?

After all, saying to your god, "You're not the boss of me!" is an excellent way to lose favor; but if you insist on still playing a priest, well, what the heck are you worshiping? Certainly not the god you started with!

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