Elizabeth Barrette (ysabetwordsmith) wrote,
Elizabeth Barrette
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Poem: "To Hear the Falling of the Trees"

This poem came out of the April 3, 2012 Poetry Fishbowl.  It was inspired by morrigans_eve who wondered about environmentalists in a steampunk setting.  I liked the punk aspect of looking at the gritty underside of all that shining progress, which in this case, means the damage done by acquiring and using the fuels that enables the steam revolution.  This poem has been sponsored by Anthony and Shirley Barrette.

To Hear the Falling of the Trees
-- a villanelle


The winter comes, but does not freeze.
It does not take an engineer
To hear the falling of the trees.

The steam is hot; the engines wheeze
And bring the future huffing here.
The winter comes, but does not freeze.

The future swings a long trapeze;
We worry for the forests dear,
Who hear the falling of the trees.

The coal is black, and burns with ease.
The miners cough, but who will hear?
The winter comes, but does not freeze.

The gaslights shine, the bellows squeeze;
No engineer will pause for fear,
Nor hear the falling of the trees.

We try to tell them, beg them, please --
They turn away with deafened ear.
The winter comes, but does not freeze.
We hear the falling of the trees.

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Global warming in steampunk-world, or predictable local warming in places that have steam?
Both, sequentially. First the artificial heat creates a tropical indoor climate such that invasive pests like cockroaches -- which ordinarily die in freezing conditions -- can gain a foothold where they otherwise would not be able to survive. Then an urban heat island develops, where towns or cities are constantly warmer than the surrounding countryside; a combination of building materials that are heat sinks (stone, brick) and of active heat sources (wood, coal). Burning lots of carbon-based fuels while deforesting large tracts of land is what eventually builds up to global warming and other aspects of climate change.

And in a steampunk setting, it happens before science has advanced far enough to predict those problems ahead of time. Not that anyone in power would be likely to listen, but they aren't even going to get as much warning as we had. All they're getting is observation from people who, being closer to the land at that age of the world, start noticing the early changes like shifts in what grows when and where, the shrinking forests, etc. Plus the observed effects on humans, like blacklung from coal dust. It's harder to articulate these as major widespread issues, rather than personal issues, if the scientific infrastructure is just putting up its framework and hasn't even got the stairs laid yet.
Thank you!