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The Writing & Other Projects of Elizabeth Barrette
Poem: "Knell"
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ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: March 24th, 2012 01:45 am (UTC) (Link)


>>It occurs to me that a wiser paladin might have asked, "Why?" instead of hurling insubstantial threats about. You still wouldn't get your new sword, of course, but the information would have been much more valuable.<<

That's true. It may occur to her, or someone else, later.

>>Time and again, it's often the small mistakes - when added together - that turn the tide of battle.<<

Yes. To be fair, though, nobody goes to an ally expecting to get slapped in the face like that. It's not an easy thing to recover from, especially not fast.

Me, I was impressed that she managed to keep her temper. Not all of Gorrein's followers are fly-off-the-handle types.
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