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Poem: "Lending a Hand" - The Wordsmith's Forge
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Poem: "Lending a Hand"
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catsittingstill From: catsittingstill Date: March 11th, 2012 11:43 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Yes...

I will see what I can do :-)

I was thinking about possibly treating what I wrote there as verses, adding a chorus, perhaps something like

He's (She's / They're) just the decent people that
We all can hope to be.
He does (She does / They do) the good that comes his (her /their) way;
If he (she, they) can, why not me?

And "On Their Own" would probably work as a title.
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