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Poem: "Lending a Hand"
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wyld_dandelyon From: wyld_dandelyon Date: March 11th, 2012 03:58 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Yes...

Is there a tune for this?
catsittingstill From: catsittingstill Date: March 11th, 2012 05:25 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Yes...

There can be one, if you would like
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: March 11th, 2012 06:27 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Yes...

I would love to have a tune for this song. A title would also be helpful for linking to it. Maybe something like "On Their Own" ...?
catsittingstill From: catsittingstill Date: March 11th, 2012 11:43 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Yes...

I will see what I can do :-)

I was thinking about possibly treating what I wrote there as verses, adding a chorus, perhaps something like

He's (She's / They're) just the decent people that
We all can hope to be.
He does (She does / They do) the good that comes his (her /their) way;
If he (she, they) can, why not me?

And "On Their Own" would probably work as a title.
catsittingstill From: catsittingstill Date: March 13th, 2012 10:22 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Yes...

Tune is here in my lj
wyld_dandelyon From: wyld_dandelyon Date: March 11th, 2012 10:07 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Yes...

Well, it's a given that _I_ would like it to become a song.
catsittingstill From: catsittingstill Date: March 11th, 2012 11:43 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Yes...

I will see what I can come up with for a tune, and see above for some ideas about a possible chorus.
catsittingstill From: catsittingstill Date: March 13th, 2012 10:22 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Yes...

Tune is here in my lj
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