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Poem: "Lending a Hand" - The Wordsmith's Forge
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Poem: "Lending a Hand"
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aldersprig From: aldersprig Date: March 10th, 2012 02:58 am (UTC) (Link)
Oh, oh, awesome. I like this guy. Also, I like the daughter's insight.
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: March 10th, 2012 07:25 am (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!

>>Oh, oh, awesome. I like this guy.<<

I'm happy to hear that.

>> Also, I like the daughter's insight.<<

The Eye of Fate allows her to see things in proportion to their consequence in matters of fate. She can't see everything. People tend to show up just because they influence things around them, but it varies. Someone who makes a big impact would be vivid. This guy is probably barely discernible. Thus he isn't doing it because he's fated to be a hero, just because he's a decent guy who makes spontaneous decisions ending in similar results. Though there seems to be some two-way action; someone who made a habit of saving people could build up a 'charge' just by the amount of change it would have on the world.
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