This poem was inspired by prompts from marina_bonomi,
meeksp, and
wyld_dandelyon. "Spots" takes a detailed look at the challenges of raising even a domesticated cheetah, particularly in London where the climate is so different from where this species is adapted to live. It also features more correspondence with the Arabian alchemists, Aalim and Taysir, and an appearance of Arthur Wellesley, the Duke of Wellington.
"Spots" is 150 lines long. I haven't set a price yet, because I'd like to discuss that with you-all. As I mentioned recently, poems in this series are taking about twice as much time to write compared to other poems, because of all the background research. Just as an example, for this poem I searched pages on Arthur Wellesley, 1st Duke of Wellington, the Beech family name, British insects, cheetahs, Victorian coats, and the London Times. (Even at this rate of research, I'm still making mistakes; I have to go back and fix on in "Songs from a Distant Shore.") I'm not willing to cut down on the research, because I'm determined to get as much right as I possibly can. Epics are usually $.50/line but I have an option to price them higher if they're extra work, something I've also done a few times with shorter poems that had intricate structure.
As the Steamsmith series grows, I'll build up a set of established characters, locations, science, equipment, etc. so that I won't have to research every thing, just the new stuff. I suspect that will eventually lower the workload to around half-again the usual for a poem, rather than the double it is now. If so, the pricing can be adjusted accordingly. Also, some of the stuff I'm building up as background material -- such as the glossary -- can eventually be released as perks. Once I have my notes in coherent shape, I may also share the whole bundle with some folks backchannel; I have that in mind as a possible perk for sponsors of the series (rather than individual poems).
How would you feel about setting a higher price range for this series, based on its higher workload? Do you love it enough to pay twice the usual rate? Something in-between? Or only the standard rate? Do you have other ideas for juggling workload, pricing, and poetry? Your feedback would be most helpful.
Another Steamsmith Poem: "Spots"
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February 24 2012, 07:15:41 UTC 9 years ago
Thank you!
February 24 2012, 09:02:12 UTC 9 years ago
Re: Thank you!
February 24 2012, 17:10:27 UTC 9 years ago
By the way, did you see my message about the Chinese antology project?
Re: Thank you!
February 24 2012, 19:12:50 UTC 9 years ago
February 24 2012, 19:21:04 UTC 9 years ago
I have to go out in a few minutes but, if not today, that email will go out tomorrow. :)
February 24 2012, 23:55:11 UTC 9 years ago
How does one become a series sponsor, if you don't mind my asking?
Thank you!
February 25 2012, 00:04:58 UTC 9 years ago
>>I'd pay double, yes. This will probably put more poems into the microfunding category, though, since I'm likely to continue putting in the same general amount per fishbowl.<<
That's about what I expected. I hope to have some shorter poems as well as the really long ones, but Steamsmith already runs to epics.
>>How does one become a series sponsor, if you don't mind my asking?<<
Sometimes a person puts money directly into a series, rather than sponsoring a specific poem, as a way of telling me they really love it. That inclines me to put more time into the series, including outside of fishbowls, and to develop background materials for it. I haven't formalized this previously because it's only happened a few times.
Closely related to that is the much more frequent situation where a person prompts/sponsors many poems in a series, which may come with perks like getting extra backchannel copies of poems that someone else sponsored ("You've bought so many of these, I'm pretty sure you'll want to see this one."). Just once, I've had someone reach k-fan status all at once, within a single series, so I handled that similarly.
What I'm hoping to do with the Steamsmith series is get some of the background notes -- the heavy-duty science and history ones -- tidied up so they'll make sense to people who aren't me, and make those the perk for series sponsorship probably around the $20 level. It would be full of all kinds of inspiration for those so inclined. Some other stuff like a character cast list and a glossary is intended for public release. I'll keep you posted on developments.