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Poem: "All the Things"
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siege From: siege Date: January 7th, 2012 01:39 am (UTC) (Link)
I loved that last line, and I'm sure many soldiers have said exactly that thing. :)

So at dusk, the soldiers lay down their weapons.
They picked up mops and brooms buckets.

Missing an "and", though.
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: January 9th, 2012 04:37 am (UTC) (Link)


Thanks for catching this.
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