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The Writing & Other Projects of Elizabeth Barrette
Poem: "Opening the Gate"
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siege From: siege Date: November 7th, 2011 02:09 am (UTC) (Link)
An excellent piece. I did spot one error, though:

Step up behind a man's head,
so he can can't easily reach you
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: November 7th, 2011 02:14 am (UTC) (Link)


Thank you for the proofreading assist.

I'm glad you enjoyed the poem, too.
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