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Poem: "The Picket Fence Committee" (revised)
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eseme From: eseme Date: September 10th, 2011 03:21 am (UTC) (Link)
Yes, this is a big improvement. Much more of a committee.

The typo mentioned above :

The cheerleader and the older woman
managed to avoid falling through,
but both wound up with snagging their pantyhose.


The word "with" is not needed.
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: September 10th, 2011 05:13 am (UTC) (Link)

Fixed!

All taken care of.
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