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Poem: "The Picket Fence Committee" (revised)
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kitrona From: kitrona Date: September 9th, 2011 08:21 am (UTC) (Link)

Re: Thank you!

Agreed on all points. :) It would be awfully mysterious the way that darn bulldozer kept breaking down... or falling in a sinkhole... or the tracks came loose... or... ;)
aldersprig From: aldersprig Date: September 9th, 2011 01:16 pm (UTC) (Link)

Re: Thank you!

reminds me of the way the car always broke down on the way to summer camp...

(My dad scolded me for that ;-)

But yes, it fits better with the title, and with the feeling of a lovely house becoming a home in a ticky-tack cookie-cutter world.
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