Elizabeth Barrette (ysabetwordsmith) wrote,
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Poem: "Feathered Wings"

This poem came out of the September 7, 2011 Poetry Fishbowl.  It was inspired by a discussion among ladyqkat, the_vulture, siliconshaman, and stryck about the history and evolution of Egyptian spirituality regarding the interaction of human and animal souls in the afterlife.  It was sponsored by ladyqkat. You can also read about the goddess Ma'at and her role in the afterlife, or browse one translation of the declarations that human souls are supposed to make to the 42 judges.


Feathered Wings


It is Bastet who keeps the Temple of Cats,
caring for those who have completed their nine mortal lives.

Beside them she watches the coming and going of stars
and fishes with tawny paws in the immortal Nile.

The stripes of their faces are as subtle and full of meaning
as the wind-waves on the golden dunes of the desert.

It is Anubis who keeps the Temple of Dogs,
tending the ones who have laid down their flesh.

Beside them he points his muzzle at the silver moon
and sings the celestial hymns.

Their tall black ears are as wise as the infinite night sky,
their eyes as hot and sharp as a sunbeam.

When a human soul approaches the Hall of Two Truths,
the pets are likewise summoned before the judges.

Bastet leads the cats between the questioners,
and the cats answer in their own way:

I have not stolen milk from my woman's pitcher.
I have not left live scorpions as a gift in my man's slipper.

Anubis leads the dogs along the path,
and the dogs swear to the watchers:

I have not bitten the messenger upon the doorstep.
I have not chewed at the tablet that the scribe assigned to my boy.

Then after the human soul and the animal soul
have been weighed by Ma'at and found to be worthy,

the Goddess of Truth lets her feather fall upon them
and the wings of their souls are opened.

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Beautiful! And fairly accurate to my experience. :) (One note: Technically, it's "Bast"; "Bastet" was a New Kingdom mistranslation, as they added the extra "t" to emphasize that the last "t" in "Bast" was meant to be spoken, not dropped off as was the custom as other cultures became more a part of Egyptian culture.)

In the interest of full disclosure, I should note that Bast and Anubis are my patron gods. :)
Didn't Bastet become the standard version in the end though? So it would kind of depend on whom was telling it... i.e post roman they'd call her Bastet.
No, that's a modern mistranslation.

http://www.per-bast.org/bast/essay6.html
According to my moderate knowledge of Egyptian culture, "Bast" referred to the goddess in her anthropomorphic form, and those aspects more closely relating to humans such as sexuality and beauty; whereas "Bastet" referred to the goddess in her fully feline form, and those aspects specifically relating to the sanctity and care of cats.

(It does not help that we don't know exactly how the language sounded in its various iterations.)

So I went with "Bastet" here because that seems to be the form of her name that people associate most closely with cats.

It would be interesting to explore the evolution of the Egyptian language over time, though. I haven't found a good source for that yet. My exposure to it is primarily through books about Egyptian religion, and some history (and a dictionary of Egyptian Arabic which is really not the same thing but somewhat influenced by the original).
I've not heard that explanation of the different names; according to my knowledge, "Bastet" is a modern mistranslation.

http://www.per-bast.org/bast/essay6.html
Love it...
I'm happy to hear this.

Re: Thank you!

siliconshaman

September 8 2011, 00:47:39 UTC 9 years ago Edited:  September 8 2011, 00:52:33 UTC

Although.. I suppose I should have said something about how the soul of human 'owners' [although the demotic glyph has connotations of 'entrusted with the care of'] is also weighted by the animals testimony... i.e they're judged on what their companion animal says of them.

but I didn't remember that bit of lore until I read this...Ah well, another time. It's still lovely and very evocative. [sometimes accuracy is the death of brevity, and the bane of poetry.]
Oh right, that's why they appear together. I knew that seemed like the right way to present it, but hadn't explicitly worked out that factor. Thanks for highlighting it.
That is a really lovely image. Pets can be vital, and the fact that they share the judgement and aid in it is lovely.
I had that in the back of my mind, but it was siliconshaman who brought it to conscious awareness. Compare with "Jack and the White Cow" where good care of livestock also pays off.

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