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Poem: "Stained" - The Wordsmith's Forge
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Poem: "Stained"
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siege From: siege Date: August 6th, 2011 07:31 pm (UTC) (Link)
Speaking up as Johan pushes Shahana's hand away... here is a plot I've seen before, but its content and execution tempt and fascinate me. I'm anticipating the verses describing the rest of the evening.
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: August 6th, 2011 09:12 pm (UTC) (Link)

Yes...

I have done other versions of this, though it never plays out quite the same. People have different reasons for offering help -- and for accepting or declining it. So it's a favorite of mine too.

Johan is in rough shape, more than just physically, poor guy. There's a good deal about the rest of the evening; I think you'll enjoy it.
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