Elizabeth Barrette (ysabetwordsmith) wrote,
Elizabeth Barrette
ysabetwordsmith

  • Mood:

Poetry Fishbowl Open!

The Poetry Fishbowl is now CLOSED.  Thank you all for not laughing as I tried valiantly to hang onto a firehose all by myself.

Starting now, the Poetry Fishbowl is open!  Today's theme is "corruption and redemption."  (You can be creative about interpreting either or both of those terms.)  I will be checking this page periodically throughout the day. When people make suggestions, I'll pick some and weave them together into a poem ... and then another ... and so on. I'm hoping to get a lot of ideas and a lot of poems.


What Is a Poetry Fishbowl?

Writing is usually considered a solitary pursuit. One exception to this is a fascinating exercise called a "fishbowl." This has various forms, but all of them basically involve some kind of writing in public, usually with interaction between author and audience. A famous example is Harlan Ellison's series of "stories under glass" in which he sits in a bookstore window and writes a new story based on an idea that someone gives him. Writing classes sometimes include a version where students watch each other write, often with students calling out suggestions which are chalked up on the blackboard for those writing to use as inspiration.

In this online version of a Poetry Fishbowl, I begin by setting a theme; today's theme is "corruption and redemption." I invite people to suggest characters, settings, and other things relating to that theme. Then I use those prompts as inspiration for writing poems.


Cyberfunded Creativity

I'm practicing cyberfunded creativity. If you enjoy what I'm doing and want to see more of it, please feed the Bard. The following options are currently available:

1) Sponsor the Fishbowl -- Here is a PayPal button for donations. There is no specific requirement, but $1 is the minimum recommended size for PayPal transactions since they take a cut from every one. You can also donate via check or money order sent by postal mail. If you make a donation and tell me about it, I promise to use one of your prompts. Anonymous donations are perfectly welcome, just won't get that perk. General donations will be tallied, and at the end of the fishbowl I’ll post a list of eligible poems based on the total funding; then the audience can vote on which they want to see posted.

2) Swim, Fishie, Swim! -- A new feature in conjunction with fishbowl sponsorship is this progress meter showing the amount donated.  At $150 you get a free series poem; at $200 you get an extra fishbowl featuring a poetic series.

$317 raised, first goal MET, second goal MET, third impromptu goal MET

3) Buy It Now! -- Gakked from various e-auction sites, this feature allows you to sponsor a specific poem. If you don't want to wait for some editor to buy and publish my poem so you can read it, well, now you don't have to. Sponsoring a poem means that I will immediately post it on my blog for everyone to see, with the name of the sponsor (or another dedicate) if you wish; plus you get a nonexclusive publication right, so you can post it on your own blog or elsewhere as long as you keep the credits intact. You'll need to tell me the title of the poem you want to sponsor. I'm basing the prices on length, and they're comparable to what I typically make selling poetry to magazines (semi-pro rates according to Duotrope's Digest).

0-10 lines: $5
11-25 lines: $10
26-40 lines: $15
41-60 lines: $20
Poems over 60 lines, or with very intricate structure, fall into custom pricing.

4) Commission a scrapbook page. I can render a chosen poem in hardcopy format, on colorful paper, using archival materials for background and any embellishments. This will be suitable for framing or for adding to a scrapbook. Commission details are here.  See latest photos of sample scrapbooked poems: "Sample Scrapbooked Poems 1-24-11"

5) Spread the word. Echo or link to this post on your LiveJournal, other blog, Twitter, Facebook, MySpace, Digg, StumbleUpon, or any other social network.  The Twitter hashtag is #poetryfishbowl.  Encourage people to come here and participate in the fishbowl.  If you have room for it, including your own prompt will give your readers an idea of what the prompts should look like; ideally, update later to include the thumbnail of the poem I write, and a link to the poem if it gets published.  If there is at least one new prompter or donor, I will post an extra freebie poem.

New linkback perk: I have a spare series poem available, and each linkback will reveal a verse of the poem.  One person can do multiple links if they're on different services, like Dreamwidth or Twitter, rather than all on LiveJournal.  Outside LJ you'll need to tell me where you're linking so that I can tally the links.  "Purity" belongs to the Paths of the Paladins series and has 12 verses. Completed!


Additional Notes

1) I customarily post replies to prompt posts telling people which of their prompts I'm using, with a brief description of the resulting poem(s). If you want to know what's available, watch for those "thumbnails."

2) You don't have to pay me to see a poem based on a prompt that you gave me. I try to send copies of poems to people, mostly using the LJ message function.  (Anonymous prompters will miss this perk unless you give me your eddress.)  These are for-your-eyes-only, though, not for sharing.

3) Sponsors of the Poetry Fishbowl in general, or of specific poems, will gain access to an extra post in appreciation of their generosity.  While you're on the Donors list, you can view all of the custom-locked posts in that category.  Click the "donors" tag to read the archive of those.  I've also posted a list of other donor perks there.  I customarily leave donor names on the list for two months, so you'll get to see the perk-post from this month and next.

4) After the Poetry Fishbowl concludes, I will post a list of unsold poems and their prices, to make it easier for folks to see what they might want to sponsor.

5) If donations total $150+ by Friday evening then I'll write an extra series poem after the Poetry Fishbowl, and post it for free.  Everyone will get to vote which series gets a new poem.  August donors will get some kind of input into the poem's content; I'm currently planning to ask them for prompts, but it could be something else.  If donations reach $200, the perk upgrades so that you get a whole extra fishbowl for a poetic series, including a free poem.  Everyone will get to vote on which series, and give prompts during the extra fishbowl, although it's likely to be a half-day rather than a whole day.


Feed the Fish!
Now's your chance to participate in the creative process by posting ideas for me to write about. Today's theme is "corruption and redemption."  I'll be soliciting ideas for tainted heroes, villains with second thoughts, clergy trying to sway people toward good or evil, pollution, contagions, aspects of corruption, different types of redemption, things that taint people, inspiration for redemption, reasons why people switch sides, turning points along the path, hard choices, places that are tainted in some way, holy ground, restoration projects, and poetic forms in particular.  But anything is welcome, really. If you manage to recommend a form that I don't recognize, I will probably pounce on it and ask you for its rules. I do have the first edition of Lewis Turco's The Book of Forms which covers most common and many obscure forms.

I'll post at least one of the fishbowl poems here so you-all can enjoy it. (Remember, you get an extra freebie poem if someone new posts a prompt or makes a donation, an extra series poem  if donations reach $150+, and a series fishbowl  if donations reach $200.  Linkbacks reveal verses of "Purity.") The rest of the poems will go into my archive for magazine submission.
Tags: cyberfunded creativity, fishbowl, poetry, reading, spirituality, writing
Subscribe

  • Post a new comment

    Error

    default userpic

    Your IP address will be recorded 

    When you submit the form an invisible reCAPTCHA check will be performed.
    You must follow the Privacy Policy and Google Terms of use.
  • 142 comments
Previous
← Ctrl ← Alt
Next
Ctrl → Alt →
Corruption: Money. Politicians. Power.

Redemption: Friendship. Compassion. Learning to actually listen to the other guy or gal.

Hmm....I think I've been watching too much of what our broadcasters call news these days.
Absolute power corrupts absoutely?

What about the headrush power of doing the right thing? Like that kid who gave the ball he caught to a smaller kid... http://abcnews.go.com/WNT/video/young-baseball-fans-act-generosity-14139642

wyld_dandelyon

9 years ago

aldersprig

9 years ago

stryck

9 years ago

aldersprig

9 years ago

siliconshaman

9 years ago

Poem

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

siege

9 years ago

moonwolf1988

9 years ago

Poem

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

Poem

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

"Corruption and redemption;" the first thing that comes to mind is the Prophecy movies, Gabriel fighting God for the salvation of mankind. So. Redemption through corruption; the grey, the place where something looks evil, becomes an enemy to remain a friend, falls to succeed.

The English Language has been called "as pure as a cribhouse whore," but there's a melody and a music and a rebirth to its corruption, isn't there? (rhyming couplets, or sonnets, in honour of Chaucer and Shakespeare, who corrupted and shaped the language, maybe?)

I've been watching a lot of Criminal Minds lately: the virgin/whore complex. Does it have a male counterpart?

A rite meant to corrupt that instead purifies. Or vice versa.

What happens when the witch hunters visit Monster House? We haven't seen them in a while.
From your prompt about witch hunters visiting Monster House, and another from janetmiles about doing evil in the name of good, I got the free-verse poem "No Vacancy." It's also somewhat inspired by what happened here, once, when an unwelcome and incompatible visitor arrived on our doorstep.

13 lines, Buy It Now = $10
Oh, hey--another thing that comes to mind is magical corruption, the corruption that comes from being gifted (or cursed) with an inner beast or hunger, or a need that can't easily be satisfied (or perhaps at all) without harming others. You see this struggle in many vampire and werewolf stories, but I bet you could do something interesting with it.
"Corruption and redemption;"

What of those who don't WANT redemption? Are they truly corrupt, or are they simply at peace with the role they are slated to play within the world. Because the world isn't balanced without some of both. So what of those who knowingly fulfill the balance in the world?
I'm a fan of fairytales, both in terms of the storytelling charm and the scholarly stuff right down to the Aarne-Thompson Index. So "Hag-Ridden" is a poem about the importance of adversaries on the hero's journey. This poem is free verse.

38 lines, Buy It Now = $15
imagined corruption

holding oneself to unreasonably standards

forgiving oneself
See the thumbnail for "Stained" under the_vulture's comment below; you're in there too.
Please don't kill me for suggesting a new series, but I think this theme would go really well with the "villain who didn't want to be" that you wrote some months ago, the one where the daughter of the Hereditary Evil family ran away, found her way into the tower, and fell in love.

Okay, got that out of my system.

Corruption: the slippery slope of doing Evil for the sake of what you believe to be Good.

Redemption: "I have this here coupon . . . ."

I'm really sorry; I know these suck as prompts. I'll at least signal-boost.
They are quite excellent prompts.

From the coupon prompt I got "Redemption," a free-verse poem about what a Pagan soul might do with a get-out-of-Hell-free card.

19 lines, Buy It Now = $10

SPONSORED!!!!!

janetmiles

9 years ago

Now posting in the right place...

Well, I've been on a Three Kingdom binge recently, so, for corruption and temptation, what about chancellor Cao Cao?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cao_Cao
He is seen in folklore as the archetypal power-grabbing minister but also a military genius. The Chinese equivalent to 'Speak of the devil...' is '說曹操﹐曹操到' (shuo Cao Cao, Cao Cao dao) 'mention Cao Cao, Cao Cao arrives'to commemorate his lightning-fast moves.

And...what could have been if he didn't give in to the temptation of power? If in that moment where he saw the opportunity he had said 'No' instead, like Zhuge Liang did? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zhuge_Liang#Service_under_Liu_Shan

Sorry, my prompts are getting monster-sized
I used Cao Cao and Zhuge Liang as inspiration for two historic figures who became the role models for the Origami Mage and the Kirigami Mage. And now we know how the conflict turned personal...

45 lines, Buy It Now = $20

Re: Poem

marina_bonomi

9 years ago

Thank you!

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

the_vulture

9 years ago

marina_bonomi

9 years ago

the_vulture

9 years ago

Wow!

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

the_vulture

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

the_vulture

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

the_vulture

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

the_vulture

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

the_vulture

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

the_vulture

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

the_vulture

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

the_vulture

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

the_vulture

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

the_vulture

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

the_vulture

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

the_vulture

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

the_vulture

9 years ago

Re: Wow!

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

Well...

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

Re: Well...

the_vulture

9 years ago

Re: Well...

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

Re: Well...

the_vulture

9 years ago

Re: Well...

stryck

9 years ago

Re: Well...

marina_bonomi

9 years ago

Re: Well...

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

Some elements are almost impossible to find "pure", instead inevitably corrupted by being combined with something else. Aluminum, for example. Often, they're stronger or more useful that way, too.

Oxygen is often the corrupting agent.
Another thought from my work in the mortgage industry. A lot of times, if things get to the point where they've been sold or threatened or foreclosed and need to be redeemed, the redemption costs a lot more and requires more steps to complete than merely keeping things up in the first place.

Stopping corruption before it gets too far would be nice.

siege

9 years ago

stryck

9 years ago

Poem

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

I'm thinking of the corruption of something like Chinese Whispers - when you think that you've heard something that turns out to be something different and the problems it causes.

Also the corruption of writing that is caused from writing from a certain point of view. Like the Bible being written by men who had grown up in a patriachal society or how history is distorted by whoever is in control of writing about it.
Inspired by the law firm of Kempt, Sheveled, & Ruly: what, exactly, is "ruption"? There's co-rruption, dis-ruption, e-ruption, inter-ruption -- what's the relationship?
'Ruption' makes me think of a hole or a break in something, so it is damaged in some way. A disruption breaks concentration; an interruption may break a conversation or a song or someone's dream; and corruption is when what is good and honest is damaged by a break in what someone else sees as good practice or what the corrupt person once saw s good practice.

Nicely done!

my_partner_doug

9 years ago

Re: Wordplay

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

A magical artifact that was intended to do something good, but was corrupted by the monstrous acts of the people around it.
"Cleaning that is going to be a pain."
"Honey, you took the job."
"Yeah, but I didn't know I was going to be cleaning soul slime out of carpet as well."
"Sure you did."

From this I got "As Tenuous as Mist," a free-verse poem about an artifact created to bestow magic, which sometimes steals the power or even the life from people who try to use it.

87 lines, Buy It Now = $43.50
One wonders how the Judas Goat feels about the whole situation. After all, he's just a goat.
From your prompt about the Judas Goat I got "Nettled." This free-verse poem covers the goat's perspective and where the goat ends up afterwards.

12 lines, Buy It Now = $10
A lot of stories feature heroes with a talent for talking their enemies into becoming friends. I'd like to see what that looks like from the 'villain's' perspective...maybe one who's tempted for awhile, but eventually decides that all that helpfulness and self-sacrifice is lunacy after all...
(I'm not Ysabet, but what a nifty prompt!)

Poem

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

jenny_evergreen

August 2 2011, 20:02:42 UTC 9 years ago Edited:  August 2 2011, 20:07:46 UTC

Redeeming a relationship when you can't interact with the person anymore. (I've had to do this with a friendship.)

Corruption is a very subjective thing; there are lots of "unredeemables" out there because they don't want or need to be redeemed.
There's also the viewpoint of the redeemer who figures this out and comes to terms with it.

Redemption through corruption is always an interesting story.

P.S. My mind always goes to the sexually "promiscuous", the prostitute, etc, when I think of people who don't necessarily want or need to be redeemed.

The "sin eater" was once a common profession among the poor and beggarly, for quite a while. They would eat food upon which others had cast their sins. Essentially, because they were hungry, they sold their bodies and the health of their souls for the sake of another's supposed redemption.

But if you truly believe that taking on the burden of extra sin will bring God to someone... what of the sin you had carried before? "My yoke is light" says the scripture, after all.
Lucifer was framed!
Seriously though... what if we'd got the whole thing wrong.
The Bible never equates the name "Lucifer" with the devil; that mythology is of post-biblical origin. OTOH, of the two principal non-human characters in the Genesis "Garden of Eden" creation myth, the Serpent (also frequently equated with the Devil) is the only one who never lies! The Creator is the only one spouting misdirection and misrepresentations regarding facts and consequences of actions.

And for an interesting take on "what if we'd got the whole thing wrong", see Harlan Ellison's Hugo-award winning short story "The Deathbird".

Poem

ysabetwordsmith

9 years ago

Previous
← Ctrl ← Alt
Next
Ctrl → Alt →