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Poem: "A Night More Full"
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the_vulture From: the_vulture Date: July 14th, 2011 12:04 am (UTC) (Link)
I rather like the parallel between Shahana wrapping her cloak around the fallen Goddess and Ari wrapping her cloak around Shahana. Each, in action, demonstrates her commitment to the other.
ysabetwordsmith From: ysabetwordsmith Date: July 14th, 2011 12:11 am (UTC) (Link)

Thank you!

*grin* I was hoping someone would catch that. Yes, it's a deliberate parallel. I do things like this in fiction, sometimes, but the connection is often tighter in poetry where there's a very specific lineup of related actions or phrases.
the_vulture From: the_vulture Date: July 14th, 2011 12:56 am (UTC) (Link)

Re: Thank you!

It's an interesting technique to use. :)
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