This poem came out of the July 5, 2011 Poetry Fishbowl. It was inspired by a prompt from kelkyag and sponsored by
janetmiles.
The Hiring Hall stood quiet
except for a quartet of apprentices.
All of the experienced adventurers
were out on an assignment.
Vielle strummed her lute.
"Battle sounds so romantic,"
she sighed. "When I'm a bard,
I'll tour all the battlefields of the land."
"When I'm a fighter, I'll go with you,"
said Gret, stroking his sword hilt.
"If your Master is as stubborn as my Mistress,
though, it's a long time before we get anywhere."
"Too true," said Ruthanne, firefly lights
weaving trails around her fingertips.
"My Mistress won't even let me past cantrips."
The other apprentices nodded commiseration.
"I pray that we all see some excitement,"
said Pren, clasping his holy symbol.
"Otherwise we may die of boredom."
They drank to that, but it was only apple cider.
Just then, the Hiring Hall door slammed open.
Vielle's and Pren's Masters carried Gret's Mistress,
leaving a broad trail of blood. Every time Ruthanne's Mistress
put out her own robes, the flames rekindled themselves.
The Healers on duty at the Hall
quickly hustled the battered adventurers
into a back room and shut the door behind them.
Silence fell again.
"Well," Gret said a bit faintly,
"we should really get back to our studies."
"Yes," Vielle agreed, "I'm with you."
Pren and Ruthanne hurried after them.
July 6 2011, 19:39:03 UTC 9 years ago
Yay!
July 6 2011, 21:03:20 UTC 9 years ago
July 6 2011, 21:19:22 UTC 9 years ago
(though a couple of people have linked blog fiction about schools at me lately that seem to focus on the relationships side of them, which I hasten to add is not what I see as the focus element of schools. They're there to learn, darn it!)
July 6 2011, 22:53:36 UTC 9 years ago
The Eastridge School for Adventurers.
Well...
July 7 2011, 02:48:32 UTC 9 years ago
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Yes...
July 7 2011, 00:55:02 UTC 9 years ago
That's a different type of story, really. I like it when the triumph is based on using their wits to maximize their resources, or discovering and developing untapped potential. If it's just luck-n-pluck, not so much fun.
>>It's nice to see some of them actually take a good look at what's out there and say "You know what? I'm not ready yet..." <<
Yep, these are quite new adventuring students. They've seen their teachers come back victorious a few times. This is their first look at what happens when adventurers go out and get creamed. That can be enlightening, if you're not a complete idiot.
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Re: Yes...
July 7 2011, 01:49:47 UTC 9 years ago
July 7 2011, 00:37:59 UTC 9 years ago
At least they are smart enough to go study.
Yes...
July 7 2011, 02:02:17 UTC 9 years ago
July 7 2011, 02:28:21 UTC 9 years ago
(How I miss Symond's Scrumpy Jack in a cold tin... *sigh*)
Hmm...
July 7 2011, 02:37:35 UTC 9 years ago
I do appreciate the fact-checking assist, though. I know I've got fans in many different countries, and I'd like my writing to be widely accessible.
Re: Hmm...
July 7 2011, 02:49:30 UTC 9 years ago
... And I still miss Scrumpy Jack. I really could use a cold tin of that right now, with all this heat.
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July 7 2011, 03:10:02 UTC 9 years ago
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