Poetry Fishbowl Open!: ysabetwordsmith

The Poetry Fishbowl is now CLOSED. Thank you all for your enthusiasm.

Starting now, the Poetry Fishbowl is open! Today's theme is "low fantasy." I will be checking this page periodically throughout the day. When people make suggestions, I'll pick some and weave them together into a poem ... and then another ... and so on. I'm hoping to get a lot of ideas and a lot of poems.

What is "low fantasy" anyway? It's usually contrasted with high fantasy, and can mean: small-scale rather than large-scale events, minor rather than major heroes, less rather than more magic, also sometimes stories set in a close analog of our world rather than an obviously different fantasy world, ambiguous rather than polarized morality, and/or a tone more gritty than glowing. Low fantasy is about saving a village rather than a country or a world, about getting one or two people's lives to work halfway decently, about solving problems with the gear on your back rather than an army's worth, and dealing with problems that don't really have good solutions. In the rain. So for instance, the Fiorenza series mainly concerns life in a quiet little village, with occasional preternatural problems that get solved more by wit than magic.

What Is a Poetry Fishbowl?

Writing is usually considered a solitary pursuit. One exception to this is a fascinating exercise called a "fishbowl." This has various forms, but all of them basically involve some kind of writing in public, usually with interaction between author and audience. A famous example is Harlan Ellison's series of "stories under glass" in which he sits in a bookstore window and writes a new story based on an idea that someone gives him. Writing classes sometimes include a version where students watch each other write, often with students calling out suggestions which are chalked up on the blackboard for those writing to use as inspiration.

In this online version of a Poetry Fishbowl, I begin by setting a theme; today's theme is "low fantasy." I invite people to suggest characters, settings, and other things relating to that theme. Then I use those prompts as inspiration for writing poems.

Cyberfunded Creativity

I'm practicing cyberfunded creativity. If you enjoy what I'm doing and want to see more of it, please feed the Bard. The following options are currently available:

1) Sponsor the Fishbowl -- Here is a PayPal button for donations. There is no specific requirement, but $1 is the minimum recommended size for PayPal transactions since they take a cut from every one. You can also donate via check or money order sent by postal mail. If you make a donation and tell me about it, I promise to use one of your prompts. Anonymous donations are perfectly welcome, just won't get that perk. General donations will be tallied, and at the end of the fishbowl I’ll post a list of eligible poems based on the total funding; then the audience can vote on which they want to see posted.

2) Buy It Now! -- Gakked from various e-auction sites, this feature allows you to sponsor a specific poem. If you don't want to wait for some editor to buy and publish my poem so you can read it, well, now you don't have to. Sponsoring a poem means that I will immediately post it on my blog for everyone to see, with the name of the sponsor (or another dedicate) if you wish; plus you get a nonexclusive publication right, so you can post it on your own blog or elsewhere as long as you keep the credits intact. You'll need to tell me the title of the poem you want to sponsor. I'm basing the prices on length, and they're comparable to what I typically make selling poetry to magazines (semi-pro rates according to Duotrope's Digest).

0-10 lines: $5
11-25 lines: $10
26-40 lines: $15
41-60 lines: $20
Poems over 60 lines, or with very intricate structure, fall into custom pricing.

3) Commission a scrapbook page. I can render a chosen poem in hardcopy format, on colorful paper, using archival materials for background and any embellishments. This will be suitable for framing or for adding to a scrapbook. Commission details are here. See latest photos of sample scrapbooked poems: "Sample Scrapbooked Poems 1-24-11"

4) Spread the word. Echo or link to this post on your LiveJournal, other blog, Twitter, Facebook, MySpace, Digg, StumbleUpon, or any other social network. The Twitter hashtag is #poetryfishbowl. Encourage people to come here and participate in the fishbowl. If you have room for it, including your own prompt will give your readers an idea of what the prompts should look like; ideally, update later to include the thumbnail of the poem I write, and a link to the poem if it gets published. If there is at least one new prompter or donor, I will post an extra freebie poem.

Additional Notes

1) I customarily post replies to prompt posts telling people which of their prompts I'm using, with a brief description of the resulting poem(s). If you want to know what's available, watch for those "thumbnails."

2) You don't have to pay me to see a poem based on a prompt that you gave me. I try to send copies of poems to people, mostly using the LJ message function. (Anonymous prompters will miss this perk unless you give me your eddress.) These are for-your-eyes-only, though, not for sharing.

3) Sponsors of the Poetry Fishbowl in general, or of specific poems, will gain access to an extra post in appreciation of their generosity.  While you're on the Donors list, you can view all of the custom-locked posts in that category. Click the "donors" tag to read the archive of those. I've also posted a list of other donor perks there. I customarily leave donor names on the list for two months, so you'll get to see the perk-post from this month and next.

4) After the Poetry Fishbowl concludes, I will post a list of unsold poems and their prices, to make it easier for folks to see what they might want to sponsor.

5) If donations total $150+ by Friday evening then I'll write an extra series poem after the Poetry Fishbowl, and post it for free. Everyone will get to vote which series gets a new poem.  July donors will get some kind of input into the poem's content; I'm currently planning to ask them for prompts, but it could be something else.

Feed the Fish!
Now's your chance to participate in the creative process by posting ideas for me to write about. Today's theme is "low fantasy."

I'll be soliciting ideas for characters of minor heroes, antiheroes, sidekicks and second fiddles, ordinary villagers, henchmen, characters in that grey area between hero and villain, broken or mismade magical artifacts, unusual adventuring gear, ordinary items used to save the day, small-scale conflicts, side scenes from epic events, ways in which epics affect ordinary people, scenes that show off the gritty tone of low fantasy, solutions that don't involve magic, places where something important happened long ago, classic low-fantasy settings such as sleepy villages or deep forests, and poetic forms in particular. But anything is welcome, really. If you manage to recommend a form that I don't recognize, I will probably pounce on it and ask you for its rules. I do have the first edition of Lewis Turco's The Book of Forms which covers most common and many obscure forms.

I'll post at least one of the fishbowl poems here so you-all can enjoy it. (Remember, you get an extra freebie poem if someone new posts a prompt or makes a donation, and an extra series poem if donations reach $150+.) The rest will go into my archive for magazine submission.

aldersprig

July 5 2011, 17:47:14 UTC 9 years ago

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I always had a problem with white knights. Their moral code never seems to allow for reality.

Grey knights, grey hats, grey witches, and grey nights.

Kitchen heroes.

The aftermath after the heroes ride through (There's a great line in one of the Black Cauldron series to the idea that, to a peasant, a great war of knights is mostly about ruined fields and ruined crops).

(related but off-topic: I always wanted to know what happened the day after movies like Independence Day).

Urban Fantasy: Truckers and truckstops.

July 5 2011, 17:48:10 UTC 9 years ago

Off of small-scale: tiny warriors. Fantasy in a terrarium.

the_vulture

July 5 2011, 18:45:30 UTC 9 years ago Edited: July 5 2011, 18:46:53 UTC

"Urban Fantasy: Truckers and truckstops."

Whilst the rest of the world in Big Trouble In Little China was definitely high fantasy, Jack Burton, the 'hero' of the film, was most assuredly low fantasy. XD

Jack Burton: When some wild-eyed, eight-foot-tall maniac grabs your neck, taps the back of your favorite head up against the bar-room wall, and he looks you crooked in the eye and he asks you if ya paid your dues, you just stare that big sucker right back in the eye, and you remember what ol' Jack Burton always says at a time like that: "Have ya paid your dues, Jack?" "Yessir, the check is in the mail."

July 5 2011, 18:47:41 UTC 9 years ago

*giggle* Yes yes yes! I love that movie! Can't get enough of it!

July 5 2011, 18:59:55 UTC 9 years ago

It's a perennial favourite with the Kung Fu club I belong to. XD

eseme

July 5 2011, 23:46:20 UTC 9 years ago

I must watch it. Every Feng Shui game I play references it non-stop.

The GM has a special edition DVD with an alternate ending...

July 6 2011, 00:22:08 UTC 9 years ago

Wait, what? Alternate ending???

July 6 2011, 01:18:18 UTC 9 years ago

She said something about a bunch of thugs in a van on a pier and they got rammed from behind...

Not having seen the movie, it meant nothing to me. She referenced the thugs by who they were in the movie, but I don't remember that bit.

July 6 2011, 03:31:12 UTC 9 years ago

Okay, now I really gotta see that alternate ending just to answer the serious WTF? I've now got in my brain. XD

July 6 2011, 08:16:29 UTC 9 years ago

Thank you, YouTube! I got to see the scene that was cut from the ending (it wasn't an alternate ending). I kinda figured it might've been Jack settling a score with the Lords of Death, but I can understand why the scene was cut; it was just a wee bit dark.

July 6 2011, 22:35:13 UTC 9 years ago

Oh good, my memory form the con just 1.5 weeks ago is not wrong (con memory sometimes is). I *thought* that was the the movie.

July 5 2011, 18:52:00 UTC 9 years ago

*giggle* (Replying to edited)... I'd forgotten that quote. It's been a while. <3!

July 5 2011, 18:58:51 UTC 9 years ago

Yeah, I was torn between which set of quotes to put up. The second just seemed to get the quality of Jack's character across a little better without any need for context. But just for you...

Jack Burton: I don't get this at all. I thought Lo Pan—

Lo Pan: Shut up, Mr. Burton! You were not brought upon this world to 'get it'!

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