Elizabeth Barrette (ysabetwordsmith) wrote,
Elizabeth Barrette
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Poem: "Moral Traditions"

This poem came out of the May 3, 2011 Poetry Fishbowl.  It was inspired by new prompter idhren24 and sponsored by laffingkat. If you like the idea of updated folk tales, I've done some in my own poetry and fiction -- but I also recommend the work of Rosemary Lake.


Moral Traditions


Time is not locked
in a crystal casket.
It twists and grows
like a beanstalk.
What we knew
when the world was new
sometimes changes
as we climb higher.
the patterns remain --
three brothers,
glass slippers,
swords and dragons --
but the messages
can be as different
as bud and blossom,
upholding fresh virtues.
The hero can be rescued
from a terrible fate.
The heroine can
save the world.
He can be gentle
as well as handsome.
She can be smart
as well as beautiful.
Sometimes two princes
or two princesses
share the kiss
of true love.
Sometimes the key
closes, not opens.
Sometimes the monster
is the man, not the beast.
Sometimes the bandit is
not evil but misunderstood.
Sometimes the witch is
not adversary but teacher.
Folk tales are
beans and rice,
gold and clay,
food for thought.
The tales we tell
determine what we
pass down in our
moral traditions.

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Thank you!

ysabetwordsmith

May 5 2011, 17:48:42 UTC 10 years ago Edited:  May 5 2011, 17:49:33 UTC

Yes, I consider such things to be a part of modern mythology or folklore, depending on context. Frex, Star Wars is firmly mythology given the growing popularity of Jedi as a religion. Buffy is more folklore given its base in fairy tales, urban legends, etc. Part of it depends on what definitions you use; there are different ones. But all the most popular stuff becomes part of the cultural collective.

Also, this is a running theme through May's poetry. If you look at the other poems posted, you'll see it repeated.

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>> One of my favorite essays about ElfQuest was talking about how we need both big myths (Star Wars/Myths of the Gods, etc.) and more personal scale stuff (Buffy/Folk Tales/Fables, etc.). Without the full scale, we end up falling down in one part or another of life. <<

Agreed, it's like the division between High Fantasy and Low Fantasy.